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Old 01-09-2002, 04:41 AM
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Destani : Second Review
I was hoping for an improvement...


- You already failed. Look at the screenshot. But, I'll still continue the review, so you know how to improve it.

- There seems to be no storyline. That's okay with me, but you better have a really good server to make up for it.

- The tiling seems pretty awkward to me. The straight/blocky flower designs don't look very pretty. The levels are okay overall... try to add some new things here and there to spice them up.

- The birds seem to be... ah... drunk? There isn't much of an improvement from last time.

- Most of the NPCs are okay.

- No grammar mistakes found! That's one for the record!

No offense intended in this review.

Destani's Status : Fail
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Old 01-09-2002, 04:43 AM
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Re: Destani : Second Review
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- You already failed. Look at the screenshot. But, I'll still continue the review, so you know how to improve it.
That level is REALLY ugly...(Yes, I know it was posted because of copyright, not for that level)
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Old 01-09-2002, 05:48 AM
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Old 01-09-2002, 06:48 AM
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Re: Destani : Second Review
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Originally posted by Psyker
I was hoping for an improvement...


- You already failed. Look at the screenshot. But, I'll still continue the review, so you know how to improve it.

- There seems to be no storyline. That's okay with me, but you better have a really good server to make up for it.

- The tiling seems pretty awkward to me. The straight/blocky flower designs don't look very pretty. The levels are okay overall... try to add some new things here and there to spice them up.

- The birds seem to be... ah... drunk? There isn't much of an improvement from last time.

- Most of the NPCs are okay.

- No grammar mistakes found! That's one for the record!

No offense intended in this review.

Destani's Status : Fail
hey look guys, I can do wut nobody else here can do and point out wuts wrong with that level!!!!

adding detail to a level isn't just making a patern of flowers and weeds and right clicking so it fills the level, you gotta add heart to it, just add flowers in random spots and stuff.
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Old 01-09-2002, 07:19 AM
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Old 01-09-2002, 07:27 AM
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I heard from some guy that Stefan was testing thi server called Angel Dust or something... you know anything about this psyker?
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Old 01-09-2002, 07:51 AM
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hey look guys, I can do wut nobody else here can do and point out wuts wrong with that level!!!!

adding detail to a level isn't just making a patern of flowers and weeds and right clicking so it fills the level, you gotta add heart to it, just add flowers in random spots and stuff.
Sadly, it seems like copied and pasted tiles :[
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I heard from some guy that Stefan was testing thi server called Angel Dust or something... you know anything about this psyker?
Psyker has no idea what you're talking about.
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Old 01-09-2002, 08:56 AM
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ooo I know the owner of Angel Dust =)

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Old 01-09-2002, 09:06 AM
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Angel dust?

And anyway, Stefan does NOT test new PWs........ as if he had time for testing..
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