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Old 04-11-2006, 05:20 PM
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Please rate my first level (That i realy took the time to do well)

Ignoring the npcs what do you think of it?
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Old 04-11-2006, 05:27 PM
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You could attach a screenshot as well. To do so, when in your level (playing) hit ALT 1 for a full level screenshot (no light effects) or ALT 2 for the "player's" view
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Old 04-11-2006, 05:56 PM
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The -idea- was ok but it went wrong. The cliffs are not even supposed to be there, why make it lava tiles when it hurts the player, overall the level is messy.

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Old 04-12-2006, 12:33 AM
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The -idea- was ok but it went wrong. The cliffs are not even supposed to be there, why make it lava tiles when it hurts the player, overall the level is messy.
What clifs? I can change the lava tiles. They just look cool. Maby I was thinkin cuz its a bunch of spars that wall have difrent things that make them harder. I'm makin on like a obstical corse. Anoth a maze. Pluss ther is a way to avoid it. i can put a npc with the same image. Or they player can walk over one of the 2 normal tiles. So in your opinion what should i do instead.
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Old 04-12-2006, 01:04 AM
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Stop with the lava stuff. It's horrid unless you can do it right, which you can't. Practice with simple things like grass and trees.
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Stop with the lava stuff. It's horrid unless you can do it right, which you can't. Practice with simple things like grass and trees.
^ Do that instead. Start with basic towns. Work your way from there.
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Stop with the lava stuff. It's horrid unless you can do it right, which you can't. Practice with simple things like grass and trees.
Ok i will.
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Old 04-12-2006, 06:03 PM
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The level is a bit messy, but keep practicing, you might aswell improve.
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Old 04-13-2006, 06:53 PM
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Again, try something simpler. Very jumbled and things put in the wrong places. E.G. A lamp standing on lava.
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