main1.nw by xc3551v3

[zim5354]

each server has its own setting.

[Eagle]

When you hit "Select tile" in the editor, play with the tiles under the house ones that look like a tree. You will get it sooner or later.

[Xcessive54321]

o.o yeah, i keep getting a grass peice when i try

[Xcessive54321]

Heres my other version. please give me suggestions on the road and other stuff

[Eagle]

Originally Posted by Xcessive54321

Heres my other version. please give me suggestions on the road and other stuff

That looks much better. Still isn't the best level, but that looks way better. It won't hurt to even add a bit more trees, but don't over do it. Try to add some dirt to your paths, dirt always looks nice in levels.

<Edit> Some area's in your path don't look quite finished.. </Edit>

[Xcessive54321]

should i change the road to a dirt path? lol and ill take the table stuff and put trees

[Eagle]

Originally Posted by Xcessive54321

should i change the road to a dirt path? lol and ill take the table stuff and put trees

Well, you will probably need practice making sand paths. Don't use the path generater, then look ugly.. Try to make it by hand, thats why I said you may need practice. You can certaintly try if you want, though.

Also, i'm suprised that I don't see any tile errors in the swamp. Good job, most beginners make alot of mistakes in the swamp areas.

[Xcessive54321]

thanks, ill do those soon

[Xcessive54321]

Originally Posted by Eagle

Well, you will probably need practice making sand paths. Don't use the path generater, then look ugly.. Try to make it by hand, thats why I said you may need practice. You can certaintly try if you want, though.

Also, i'm suprised that I don't see any tile errors in the swamp. Good job, most beginners make alot of mistakes in the swamp areas.

heres what i have so far XD

[Crono]

NEVER USE PRE-DEFINED ROADS! EVER! Why? They look ugly. Only use them if you want to set up a layout but please do edit them. =[

[Xcessive54321]

i only have it like that for right now because i wanted to see what you guys think XD

[Silent]

Originally Posted by Xcessive54321

heres what i have so far XD

Getting better. I've circled around your tile errors (red), and things that I personally think could be done another way (yellow).

There's a better tile you can use for the cave entrance which isn't so dark and matches the surrounding tiles perfectly, and those tables could perhaps be more table and less chairs. Just a thought O_o;

[Xcessive54321]

thanks, ill fix them soon

[Eagle]

Yeah dude, don't use the path NPC. Try to make them yourself, they look a lot better.

[Benm00t]

I would try and stay away from being so symmetrical. Your level looks almost mirrored on each side, which isn't too great.