Body

[Shakram]

think of the girls and let this game look sweet not this macho ahnold **** XD
its only a feeling i know but i wonder why all guys doing this muscle thing
you can overdetail your sprites with muscle or what you want but in my eyes this sprites will never have any flair

[DustyPorViva]

I don't think he's anything like Arnold? I think it's far from overdetailed. Like I said, I'd rather practice my spriting anatomically correct, instead of jumping onto something else.

[Shakram]

ok than an other thing i zoomed in and i see u are using colors which looks from far away the same
now i know you like more details but there is no need to use more colors which you cant see from far away
and dont be angry or anything i say this only to you because you have some skills
maybe there are some points because i dont say things to sages graphics
but its not allowed to say them here
if you want to do an anatomically correct body i like it without the eyes at all
maybe do the eyebrows 3pixel long and darker

[DustyPorViva]

I don't get angry, I take critiques fairly well I believe. But the bit about muscles were purely preference.
As for the colors, I chose to be a little liberal. Mainly because I did have less colors at first, but I added a few to smoothen off some lines and shades.

[Shakram]

played around with the eyes and i turned the shoulders 2 pixel deeper
i think you lost the neck

ahh before i forget it i can write it here ...
sorry guys but you dont really need to write some pms to me
like "if i have fun to work with you on any server"
at the moment i havent really time for graal

[zokemon]

The color style fits with your avatar. I like

Originally Posted by Shakram

played around with the eyes and i turned the shoulders 2 pixel deeper
i think you lost the neck

ahh before i forget it i can write it here ...
sorry guys but you dont really need to write some pms to me
like "if i have fun to work with you on any server"
at the moment i havent really time for graal

But why don't you have fun to work with them on any server?

[Rapidwolve]

Very nice!

[Shakram]

In the end it looks like this

i know very hot

[Crow]

Originally Posted by Shakram

In the end it looks like this

i know very hot

Lol Angelu! x-x

[xXziroXx]

Originally Posted by Shakram

In the end it looks like this

i know very hot

Graal just became illegal for minors.

[Sage_Shadowbane]

Well Dusty, I did a little edit for you to show you how you could possibly improve the sprite quite a bit. Firstly, your sprite didnt seem to have a valid light source, you had the light on the head coming from the top left corner, than you had light hitting on both sides of the shoulders, so the most important edit I made was I changed the light source to coming almost directly from the top. Second, I editted the head a bit, if youll notice, I moved down the eyes a bit.. In your sprite, it had the appearence the his eyes were looking me directly in the eye, when in turn, they should actually have the appearence that he is looking "forward". But thats basically all I editted.. Hopefully I gave you a better idea on what you can do. Also hope you dont get mad for the edit without asking.

[MrAnonymous_P2P]

Dusty I like it quite alot except for the perspective and yes he is a little square.

Overall though I really like your work.


Btw I like your Avatar to

[James]

Originally Posted by Shakram

In the end it looks like this

i know very hot

Haha, what the heck. Things like this shouldn't be allowed.

[MrAnonymous_P2P]

Man-Kini all the way XD