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Old 04-29-2007, 03:49 AM
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He has a small sprite, and trying to cram in a lot of detail in there.
When you're doing sprites, the main thing you want to focus on is clarity. Sometimes you need to sacrifice the details of the sprite to make it overall more clear to the player. His sprite is not clear at all, he has muscles everywhere, or at least have emphasized them beyond the need. I think he needs to be a little more subtle with his muscle shading, and like Stephen said, drop the highlights. That way people know the muscles are there, but the fact that they are isn't the main attraction.
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Old 04-29-2007, 03:51 AM
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oh i understand now u said something about noise so i got confused
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Old 04-29-2007, 02:28 PM
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I'd say that the body itself is starting to look like that rock guy out of the fantastic four, just on a smaller scale xD
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Old 04-29-2007, 03:25 PM
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I'd say that the body itself is starting to look like that rock guy out of the fantastic four, just on a smaller scale xD
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But I agree you could sacrifice some detail to make it clearer as Dusty said :o
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Old 04-29-2007, 04:17 PM
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I'd say that the body itself is starting to look like that rock guy out of the fantastic four, just on a smaller scale xD
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Old 04-29-2007, 08:41 PM
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Detail. It looks horrible, really. Looks like someone burned him down.

Shadow. That shadow...looks kinda weird. Prolly because you added a shadow for the hands.

Contrast. You really have to up the contrast, so you can actually see the details.
Crow you seriously dont even deserve to be on these graphic forums, SERIOUSLY! Your sitting here nit picking at the thing, and instead of giving constructive crits, your just telling me what you dont like and not how to fix it. Than all you can say is "up the contrast". Seriously I thought you were a scripter... you should seriously stick to that.

Anyways, Dusty, thanks for the advice, Ill try to fix it up asap.
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Old 04-29-2007, 10:08 PM
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Crow you seriously dont even deserve to be on these graphic forums, SERIOUSLY! Your sitting here nit picking at the thing, and instead of giving constructive crits, your just telling me what you dont like and not how to fix it. Than all you can say is "up the contrast". Seriously I thought you were a scripter... you should seriously stick to that.

Anyways, Dusty, thanks for the advice, Ill try to fix it up asap.
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You said you are taking crits & comments. Dont say that if you are whining at the end anyways.

Edit: Btw, I am sure you wanna tell me that. Just because I quoted your "would be happy to fix" part doesnt mean I have to tell you how to fix your stuff. This is not my gfx, you know?
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Old 04-30-2007, 11:49 PM
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Just because its not your GFX, doesnt mean you cant tell me what you think should be fixed, your just saying "Oh I dont like that, and Oh btw, that is hideous.". You should try something like "Hey, thats not too bad, but you should seriously try to work on this or that more.". I mean seriously, how hard is it to comment someone in a respectable manor?
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Old 04-30-2007, 11:51 PM
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Whats so hard with "up the contrast"? Do you want me to tell you how to modify every single pixel of your damn body? True, I didnt really say how to fix that detail issue, but thats because I am not sure myself.
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