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Originally posted by Drakmith
The only arrogancy I see in here is you waltzing in... Saying all my work is half assed, not making any effort to help me improve at all.
Which I still doubt you can...
And at the end of the day... Who's really going to care what happened in this stupid forum?
Hell by tommorrow morning I know I'll forget... I can barely remember my name when I wake up 
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I can't give you good enough critisizm? I've given you that before, but I suppose you ignored me (I can see why you would
) but now that you're saying I can't I'm just going to have to let it go.
1 Signature:
You're lighting is bad. It looks like you just used too many brighter shades and less fewer darker shades. You pratically hightlighted the details with white, making everything seem like it has a reflective/glossy surface (which is more noticeable on the clothing and the cloak wrapping around his neck rather than his skin texture (which also has the same context to it)). I guess this would be OK for something like Graal, though none of that stuff would fit in with it very well. Graal is more cartoony/doesn't deal with shading much and stuff. Most of the rest of the picture is pretty dark to me, so all of the other details of the picture as soaked into the almost-black background. Whats with the purple on the bottom, anyways? The charater's posture is bad, also. If those are legs sticking out on the bottom of his torso, there sticking out so that it looks like he's leaning backwards, which kinda gives off a bad look for whatever he's doing. The left leg is also much skinnier than the right one (or whatever is on his leg is making it seem bigger than it is)
2
Santa Claus
Ok, alot of things wrong with this one. First of all, the posture is wrong on this one, too. Your characters lean back too much. But since he's doing whatever it seems to fit in and be more suitable than the one in your signature. The folding on his pants are bad (too big and too few of them, and the fact that there in the wrong place, too), and it makes it seem that his legs are flat. The muscle detail is also bad on it. Just to sum it up, you should focus more on what the detail shows rather then tossing it here and there and assuming what's there is going to be right.
3
Sephiroth
::sigh:: I'm getting tired of this already. His hair is the main concern here (and you didn't even finish it
). It just looks like you took gray lines and dashed it here and there. Same thing for the bangs, except they look more uncontrolled and sketchy than the rest of the picture. His shoulder blades look a little bit flat, too. You only focused the shading where they overlap each other, and not around the sides or corners.
Kingdom Hearts
::nuke::
Read: 1 and 2.
Robot
Pah
Read: 1 and
2. Actually, just read all of them over and over again.
09-12-2003, 12:29 AM
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