Archaic: A New Beginning

[Aknts]

Welcome to the land of Archaic..A land torn within itself.

Archaic used to be a land of peace, walking amoungst the streets you
would find everyday normal things such as people setting up markets,
people selling goods, and warriors of the old nation of Archaic
patrolling the streets. All was well until, the King of Archaic, King Armacious died.
He had three sons
From the beginning the land of Archaic sensed trouble. Each one of the
sons was greedy in his own way. Two of the sons, twins, Aldark and Melhelm each took half
of the the land the king had ruled. Eager for his own piece of land, Lexion, the third
brother, took a group of believers into the desert land, where no one had ever dared to
go during the King's rule. To the great surprise of Lexion, he found the desert, though harsh,
having 20 hours of sunlight in a day, to be filled with giant masses of priceless gold. Word
spread, and he quickly built up a population of people in this land easily as large as
the ones of his brothers, and they learned to adapt to the climate.
When the twins recieved word of this, they were furious, and repeatedly tried to convince
the third brother to let them in on his treasures, to no avail.
To this day the twin brothers try to get at Lexion's wealth.
Aldark and Melhem are twins, but can be very different. Aldark rules a land of mountains
in a militaristic manner, while Melhem has a grassy land of farms and fields. The twins
sometimes disagree, but keep on very good terms with each other and help each other out.
The same could be said for their people. They often visit the other lands, sometimes
disagree on things, but always remain close allies.

By: TrueHeat

So basically I'm wondering what you people think of the storyline and the concept house that I attached. We will be buying a server Monday when its available. We have a good group of people helping.

I am the Manager of the server, also Mark is Manager, both of us own it. We are going to hopefully make a server to out-do every server out and coming (Oasis). I will not post a staff list b/c well there is alot of people really helping. I will give names later on.

P.S. Thanks to Mark.