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Old 05-03-2004, 01:28 PM
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Oh wow, that made me laugh =). I really hate when people make stories out of games, make me wonder what they do with their life O_o. That's probably why I hate RPing.

Erm...yeah...nice story in some way. Plus, PG-13? Kids these days younger than 13 are way different. Btw, I love your DDR sig.
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Old 05-02-2004, 10:31 AM
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I don't truelly think the story was sick - it's fictional, and what people do in real life is even worse. But I have to agree that your aim is a bit unclear in the story. (For Willow's RP profile : http://www.freewebs.com/stormymoon/profiles.html )
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Old 05-02-2004, 05:57 PM
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Thank you for pointing that out, Satrek. It was helpful, except the last part anyway. Also, i would like to point out that these stories are chapters in a book, so that's why it seems like it's just a fragment.

((A story that tells what goes on at the Coven of Seduction. It does not tell about the Coven of Seduction, but more like what goes on at it. I might post the introduction for the Coven later.))

She sat at the windowsill, staring at the moon… so pure and white. Her eyes narrowed. She despised anything to do with purity. After all, the idea of purity was only an ideal one. The body was Made of sin. Made from sin. And made for sin.
That was the line of her coven. The Coven of Seduction. Pleasure and pain, all in one. She of course, would eventually become the high priestess of her coven, considering the current high priestess was getting a little… wrinkly. She smirked.
She was a seductress, a prostitute. She was nineteen, still many years until the... wrinkles and stretch marks started setting in. And although she gave pleasure, she had also dealt her fair share of pain. Speaking of pain…
She took out her dagger and dug the tip into her wrists. She bit her lip as she twisted it, and tore it out. Watching the blood flow, she grinned and laughed. Then with a flick of her hand, the gaping wound was gone.
Just in time, considering the High Priestess, Heather, burst through the door carrying some kind of crimson cloth in her hand. Heather tossed it at Willow, and she could see that it was a face veil. Curious… then a sudden, horrifying thought struck Willow.
Could it be? Could the wrinkles be setting in already? “You've got a client tonight. Hes into the mysterious, sexy thing. Its obvious where that thing goes, so get ready, they’re coming in 45 minutes” and with that, Heather swirled around, shutting the door behind her.
“If she is that quick when it comes to doing the deed, then it seems I've been overdoing myself,” muttered Willow, pulling on a loose red dress. She then twisted her raven-black hair up into a loose, wispy bun. It would come out during the job, but that worked into it.
She picked up the veil, giving it the once-over. It was thin, and fairly large. Willow folded it in half to form a triangle, and tied it over her nose and mouth. Looking into the mirror, she saw that Heather had chosen the red to set off her hazel eyes.
She smiled triumphantly, not that she could see it clearly. In fact, she seemed to be suffocating. Willow took it off, only to find that her hair had managed to get stuck in the knot. Without any help, she would not be able to take off the face veil. Mild panic set in.
She could not risk her reputation as future High Priestess by asking a low-level witch – or worse, a normal human – for help. Repeat: could not risk her reputation. She started laughing, short gasps for air puncturing a fruity, deep chuckle. Why hadn't she seen it before?
Wasn't she taught since a young child that to every question, magic was the answer? She muttered under her breath a spell and sighed. There, problem solved. Willow turned to look into the mirror once more to tie on the veil… when she saw it. Her hair. Which had been severed off due to the wrong spell.
How the hell did she end up muttering a severing spell instead of an anti-knot spell? She sighed and chanted a spell for her hair to grow back. Tying her hair back once again, she bent to pick up the veil when she froze. The red… the blood… the demons crimson eyes.
She shook herself in an attempt to forget her mother, her beautiful mother… who had abandoned her at the tender age of 16. Her eyes narrowed at the memory of her mothers death, and she used magic to have the veil float onto her face and walked out of her attic-room, into bedroom 13, the clients room.
As she opened the door, her eyes widened. She hadn't expected a woman. Composing her self, she walked further into the room – it didn't matter, after all, she was quite open. Striding into the room she grabbed the shirt of the woman and kissed her passionately, sinking her teeth into the bottom lip.
Mm… blood. The woman gasped as Willow slapped her and pushed her back onto the bed. Or maybe she gasped because at that exact moment, her hair decided to spill out of the bun. Whatever.
“I thought your boss said that you were supposed to be mysterious and sexy? Not rough?” The woman said timidly. Willow rolled her eyes as she bent to kiss the woman. It was going to be a very long night.

((Oh, and i hope you don't think i'm some sick guy who enjoys lesbian stories, i don't. It's just how my character i created is. Thanks.))
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Old 05-02-2004, 10:19 PM
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I guess on an RP level the only issue I have, is if this is the nature of your character a lot of dustarians would probably seek to burn your covens' homes the the ground and drive you all off.

Rping a murderous witch-prostitute requires we rp back in character, which I wouldn't know how to do in a way condusive to everyone having fun.


I don't mean to come across as narrow minded, I am speaking in terms of Dustari Law and my characters nature. If I didn't play Padren, I may even have played a cut throat pirate and mercilessly raid the ships and shores of main island. I do play padren though who has certian limits as to what he would be accepting of.


The other factor of course, is lots of people that have gold and read these forums, are 11-13 and the stories are a bit too mature for that age group, in my opinion
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Old 05-02-2004, 10:42 PM
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The other factor of course, is lots of people that have gold and read these forums, are 11-13 and the stories are a bit too mature for that age group, in my opinion
War seems to be the most popular part of RPing to everyone. I have to admit- I'd love to be a part of a well roleplayed war as well. (Again, war is not a one-night battle... if any of you are going to respond talking about stupid PKing events- don't bother, you're only showing how terrible you are). War is a bit too mature also for young people. Also, you have to be 13 years old to get a Graal account on your own legally. If you're not 13, and you're doing it legally, it's done by parent's permission. Aren't parents allowed to bring kids to rated R movies?
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Old 05-03-2004, 01:09 AM
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If you're not 13, and you're doing it legally, it's done by parent's permission. Aren't parents allowed to bring kids to rated R movies?
Of course, assuming movie is clearly marked. If its a PG-13, with R content somewhere buried in it with a small discosure a half second before that part starts to cover your eyes - that doesn't really work.


I am just stating my opinion and my suspisions that this content leans towards innappropriate for the setting.
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Old 05-03-2004, 03:44 PM
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“I thought your boss said that you were supposed to be mysterious and sexy? Not rough?” The woman said timidly.
I doubt the word sexy existed back then o.O And shouldn't it be:

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"I thought your boss said that you were supposed to be male? Not female?” The woman said timidly.
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Old 05-03-2004, 09:25 PM
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Gozelda, No. I have been through this before, this is my fictional character. You act like someone roleplaying/writing for a fictional character is new, Ugh. Open your ****ing mind. Ugh, why do you people make every thread i make about this? What you said had nothing to do with this story, but you acted like a total ass and said it anyway. What wouldn't be disgusting in your opinion? A world with only males, since a male writing about females is so disgusting. Hmm?
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Old 05-02-2004, 08:14 PM
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Old 05-02-2004, 10:21 PM
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That's why i said it was PG-13, little perverts shouldn't have clicked it if they knew it was wrong. Anyway, my GK character isn't naughty. Or not that much.
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Old 05-03-2004, 02:35 AM
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Old 05-03-2004, 04:24 AM
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mhm, being devoured by a male is much better.
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Old 05-03-2004, 01:25 PM
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Parents who allow their kids to play graal usually only a rough idea of what they're doing, i.e. no odea about possibl sexual harassment in masses for example, and no knowledge whatsoever about the possibility of their kids being exposed to 'such' material in the forums.
But apart from that, Myukoi, why don't you write your story in a whole first, go through it again to make ot continous, then give it some friends to proof-read, then post it by attatching it as a txt. That way, you avoid stylistic criticism and people who "hate you" will not bother to read a lengthy story in the first place.
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Old 05-03-2004, 07:46 PM
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Erm, why would a veil suffocate you? And why, instead of chopping your hair off with spells so that you could breathe, wouldnt you just lift the veil up?
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Old 05-03-2004, 10:09 PM
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I can understand the character
what I don't like is the way she seems to have a spell for way too many little things
enough spells to where she can accidently enchant the wrong spell and still have yet another spell take place
and then she has a spell to fix what she screwed up
seems like a bit too much to me
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