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[Snappledragon]

Heh, my first serious level. I would like to know what you people think of it.

[Lao_Su2]

Originally posted by Snappledragon
Heh, my first serious level. I would like to know what you people think of it.

Hmmm where should i start?
The level overall 1/10 for effort
the paths are all plain sand paths are never plain in nature at least not that I have seen
2nd. There is no detail in the grass what so ever add some stones and personally i dont think that the half grass tiles look good but that is only my opinion..heh....which i am obsessed with...moving on
the tree
this level reminds me of an old N'pulse level at least the top left does where you had to get into the tomb....ahh im off task....
detail the water a little more and maybe have the house on poles from the water?
Well good effort
If you have taken this as me making fun of your levels sorry I'm just trying to offer helpful advice

[Snappledragon]

No, the main reason why I posted this was to get critizism like this. Critizism like this is what makes people better, so they can improve. Thank you for responding.

[LittleBabyGirl_Bomy]

Yes, thats good critizizim (sp?)
i hate people that write "omg, that sucks" or "that level suck ass"
and such

[Gangster88]

2/10 its ugly

[Qwert616]

Hm, some things that could help.

Try to make the paths, water, small mountains, etc a little less straight.

I don't like the grass detail . I always liked the grass better as a patch with the two tiles.

Ack, that's all I can think of right now.

[BARGAD]

http://forums.graal2001.com/forums/s...threadid=21371

May be a bit helpful!

[Faheria_GP4]

-Grass is too plain
-Get Rid of Graveyard
-Dont use straight paths
-Your little mountain, dont use straight edges. Make it go in and out in places....

[Brad]

3/10

I judge lightly, the house is nice

[Snappledragon]

Thank you all for taking the time to look at my level. Everything has been very helpful to me.

[ZeroFXSM]

Originally posted by Gangster88
2/10 its ugly

You are very helpful,

I give it a 7.2 out of 5. so its a 72%. It doesn't fail its class

However, there are alot of errors you might want to look into, Picture the level like you would in a real life situation, would you have things there? would have things here? Would you even have those kinds of plants? think about that.

Keep on trying!