Playerworlds - Manatra2001 , Graal RPG, and Malhangaia

[Torankusu]

Manatra2001 - Failed
The level quality is poor, and so is the NPC Quality. There is no storyline, and the quests are
baddies only, no scripted decent bosses. There is no storyline,and there's linking errors all
over the map. (passage7.graal and other gold tree areas, and some by the water.) There are torches in most of the
levels that are copyrighted. (Ones that were in Ghost Pirate's ship, before iSplash pointed it out, and they were removed)
Fix this server up alot, and feel free to resubmit.


Graal RPG - Failed

This server is too Pokemon RolePlaying like. There's no map, and the levels are plain and boring.
The quests are ones where you get put in a room, and have to beat millions of baddies, and then
get warped no where after; No exciting hard scripted NPC Bosses. There are pet images and NPCs that are poorly scripted. Shadow Dragon NPCs are used as the class npcs (Some of them. FBW Nukes, and Remote Control bomb car.)
This server needs to be fixed up alot before resubmitting, also.

Malhangaia - Failed

This server's levels are nice and detailed, until you get away from the main town,
and then it's just grass, mountain, and tree tiles. The house tilings are nice, but they're
lacking inside levels, and quests are no where to be found, either. There are a few linking errorsin about the center of the map. The owner is free to fix these errors up and submit again.

[Jerom]

I was really hoping Malhangaia would do well.
But I guess they wont have a hard time adding detail to the grassy levels, then they can resubmitt.

[Torankusu]

Lost Islands is coming next.

[Jerom]

Originally posted by Torankusu
Lost Islands is coming next.

Weren't they already up at one point in time? I think the main plot of thier world was that the islands were made of the mud from Survivor island...o_0;;
But I guess we hafta wait and see what they've got made for us.

[TrueHeaT]

WHAT?! He sent some to you? I need some to test!!

[Torankusu]

Originally posted by TrueHeaT
WHAT?! He sent some to you? I need some to test!!

I will send you one if you want. I'm getting like 2 more in a few minutes anyway.

And no, Vincent didn't send them to me, people sent them to me.

[TrueHeaT]

Originally posted by Torankusu
I will send you one if you want. I'm getting like 2 more in a few minutes anyway.

And no, Vincent didn't send them to me, people sent them to me.

yay send some to me

[ownerofbabylon]

Hey TrueHeat. I will have my ready in 4 or 5 days. We had lost signt of doing inside levels and scripts so we are developing our scripts and adding new ones and also im redoing the houses outsides.

[MoonAngel]

hahaha, did you hear this? baddies quest! omg, such newbism should NEVER go online, lmao

[Enigma_LAT4]

I didnt want you to post the results of Malhangaia in the post man.. god damn.. i dont want anyone to really see, or hear about it till its done. And I have acualy dont alot more since I submitted.

Anyways, I will re submit in about 3 or 2 weeks.

Symbonia Owner of Malhangaia

[Bravo_GP1]

Well, it's alright Shawn.. All we have to do is fix those minor errors and we'll be alright, so just relax man.

[Enigma_LAT4]

Yah, I guess so, considering that i sent it in 3 days ago, and i have been making levels all day and all night.. since then. Ive only had 7 hours of sleep in 3 days. LOL.. but im getting alot done, so i dont care.

Symbonia Owner of Malhangaia

(I soon wont be able to post, I was fired on Enigma because Warcaptain doesnt want me making a playerworld and working for him at the same time)

[ownerofbabylon]

Originally posted by Bravo_GP1
Well, it's alright Shawn.. All we have to do is fix those minor errors and we'll be alright, so just relax man.

Like those NPCs that reset stats, send all accounts to jail ever 2 hours, erases a random level, and changes FTP passwords?

Yea just minor errors

[Enigma_LAT4]

Ownerofbabylon.. you talking about Malhangaia ? or Bravo?

[Neonight]

Pretty sure Bravo because Torankusu didn't mention those NPCs in the report.

[Bravo_GP1]

Bravo doesn't look so good if you ask me.. Ever since it went P2P things haven't been looking good at all.. Maybe I'm just smoking something, heh..

[Falcor]

You guys reviews are too short

I have reviewed games before and 2 sentences don't cut it.
You guys need a spot ont he website. Maybe the PW Archives where you put up the reviews of the playerwords?

[fuzie]

HELL YAH-GREAT IDEA!

[Falcor]

Forums arnt a good place. An archive would be better. i have a format for reviewing bames that forces me to detail it but thats just me. the reason its short is probably becase it is on a message board. If it was on the website it would be longer.

[fuzie]

yah and could include screen shots of teh good things and Bad things

[Yakuna2001]

Originally posted by fuzie
yah and could include screen shots of teh good things and Bad things

that would mean more work. they wont do that :P

[fuzie]

if i wuz a pw tester I certainly would-i'd be glad to make the site and everything as long as they send me bout 10 screen shots and a way larger review
------Brian--------

[Torankusu]

!!

[Psyker]

i guess i'll start putting reviews up here.

anyway, i guess this spot is better than the pwmanagement site.

[Brad_Elven]

Originally posted by Psyker
i guess i'll start putting reviews up here.

anyway, i guess this spot is better than the pwmanagement site.

I will send you babylon soon (like tonight)

[Torankusu]

Originally posted by Psyker
i guess i'll start putting reviews up here.

anyway, i guess this spot is better than the pwmanagement site.

This thread was posted when there was no site.

[Brad_Elven]

Originally posted by Torankusu
This thread was posted when there was no site.

FTP for the site doesnt work