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Old 03-17-2007, 12:59 AM
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The whole triangular thing isn't working for you - avoid it.
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Old 03-17-2007, 02:28 AM
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In truth, I adore the roof, I just don't like anything below it.
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Old 03-17-2007, 02:34 AM
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Choose better colors, lines are fine. But the colors are just throwing the whole look of it off.
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Old 03-17-2007, 09:17 AM
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The roof is the best of the parts, but like Stephen said;
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Old 03-17-2007, 12:04 PM
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Suggestions on what I can improve to make it look more appealing?
Make a version without the pyramid thing on the roof, and make another with the pyramid thing going lower (as in make it bigger).

I agree with Sephiroth though, the roof is awesome...everything below it (excluding the door) is just...meh.
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Old 03-18-2007, 07:07 AM
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Old 03-18-2007, 09:31 PM
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Old 03-21-2007, 05:45 AM
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Old 03-21-2007, 07:13 AM
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The roof and the foundation really don't seem to click to well together, it kind of looks like a giant treasure chest; I think that's what the problem is. Also, I think a better choice of color(s) would help it flow better.

Other than that, I'd give it an 8/10. Superb.
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Your wish is my law. It'll take me a couple of days though due to the fact that I'm far too lazy to do anything other then script and hunt head shots on CS:S.
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