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Old 04-24-2003, 01:23 PM
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Grass:
The grass is a bit unappealing. It has got too many random placed tiles Try and group them more together. The cloud shadow thing looks okay, but by doing that, the tiles where the clouds are, are basically all the same, so there is no detail there, which lessens the quality. Finally I think the raised grass spoilt the level, it would have been fine all flat.

Water:
The shallow water needs a bit of work. It looks too dull as there are only a few tiles you can jazz it up with (Still waiting for a shallow water rock/plant) Its a nice idea what you have done with the beach to water, although I dont think it works very well due to the lack line on the beach.

Dirt:
Great, nice use of all the possible tiles available on the tileset. I would have used some of the more to make it more detailed, but it works fine as it is.

Cliffs:
The cliffs work great, until it goes off into the North-East all the same. I think it would be better if it went towards the shadowed cloud.

Houses:
Top house:
Intresting, im not quite sure of the door on the roof, also I would jazz the roof up a bit more, its too much of the same.

Bottom House:
Nice, simple, straight to the point design. Thats great I like it. It works fine with the level.

Suggestions:
-Remove the raised grass
-Fix cliff
-Try and make beach look better
-Redetail it so its looks nice and less random.

Sparks Rating: 4.5/10
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