if (playersays) problem

[melissa1988]

Hey, I've never done scripting before and I'm just starting to learn a little bit. Would anyone be kind enough to tell me what I did wrong with this little script I made? It works for the most part, but some parts won't

NPC Code:

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if (playertouchsme) {message Welcome to my room!;sleep 3;message Do you like punk?;sleep 3;

   if (playersays(yes)) {message Really? I LOVE punk!;sleep 3;message You got any liquor?;sleep 3;

   if (playersays(yes)) {message Cool!  Give me some shots!;sleep 3;

   if (playersays(no)) {message Aww...You're no fun...;}}}

}

if (playersays(no)) {message You're *** then!  Punk rules!;sleep 3;

   if (playersays(**** you)) {message No thanks, I have your mom for that!;sleep 3;

   if (playersays(shut up pickles!)) {message No you shut up!;shootnuke down;}}

}

if (playerisfemale) {message Hey baby wanna screw?;sleep 3;

   if (playersays(no)) {message That's okay, you're just one of millions!;sleep 3;

   if (playersays(yes)) {message Go lay in the bed! I'll be there...;sleep 3;

   if (playersays(okay)) {message Go lay in the bed! I'll be there...;sleep 3;}}}

}

if (playeronhorse) {message Get off that horse you ****!  You're trackin' mud on my floor!;sleep 3;

}

if (wa****) {message Ouch!  Take this ya ****!;shootnuke down;

}

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the parts that don't work are the (playersays(no)) {message Aww...you're no fun}, (playersays(**** you)) {message No thanks...}. and a few others i think...
I'm still learning this so it's probably something stupid so I appologize to all the scripting gurus here. I've been searching all over the place for someone to help, so this is my last resort. Thanks in advance. I'm not asking for someone to fix my code, but for someone to tell me how to fix it or suggest a better way to do this.. thanks