My revised RP Story

[Zurkiba]

Zurkiba was born into Dustari during the Dustari-Zormite war. He lived a simple life and such qnd had fun with his younger brother Axel who was born a year after Zurkiba. All was well untill Zurkiba's father was called into duty and he died aboard an offensive mission on Zormite soil. His mother was kidnapped and found dead in the waters nearby leaving Zurkiba and Axel alone in the world. Both lived well by robbing stores in the nieghborhood and selling it's goods to other people for money or food. He later quit his thief career to become a Dustari Scientist Zurkiba then took a path of the sword, while Axel took the path of the wand. It wasn't untill Dustari's Pirate-Dustari war began a couple of years later (Zurkiba was 23 years old) and Zurkiba himself was drafted into the army. There he shown his own colors by showing strong strategic offenses and strong defenses and giving him the title of Dustari War Hero. After that soldiers from around the world started to call him The Wolf. So Zurkiba's name now is Zurkiba "Lupus" Warhare (Lupus is Latin for Wolf). He believes in supressive power and that the military should outrule justice. He has no honor as he will do anything for a victory. He is a master of stratagy and swordsplay and will try to mow down anyone in his way. He doesn't take threats lightly and always plans for a new world.