
09-03-2007, 06:03 PM
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Senator Amsel Zephlyn
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Join Date: Jul 2006
Posts: 283
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time to be a complete ass and point out every fault about your ganis that no normal person would ever see besides the fact that i spend too much time on graal...
anyways...
knife: really slow moving, try adding... not sure the word... phantom sprites? shadow sprites? whatever it is, look at melee ganis from like daitsu or myself and notice how it's made to look like an actual slash. Your knife looks like its slowly rotating on the hand.
Uzi: Left/right view, on a real gun the shell would not fly forward. Make the shell fly backward. Also, it recoils way too much for a single uzi. Put a smaller recoil that's more rotated so within 4-5 frames it would go back to it's original position. You can add more frames after that of the shell flying backwards or something cool like that which will happen any time you're standing still after firing the gun.
Punch: It's graal, not x-treme boxing championship. First off, i've never heard that sound when punching someone before. Second off, the left view and the up view has the arms arranged really weird. On the left view, the far arm is completely off of the body and on the up view, the right arm is down really low and looks like you're trying to upskirt some girl.
metalstorm: On the left view, it goes forward from the idle. I've never seen a gun recoil forward. On the right view, it's too high. It's up practically above his head to start. Down view: it looks as if he's either poking himself in the eye or throwing the gun up over his head. Layer the gun below the head so it looks as if it's resting on his shoulder. Looks better for graal. Up view, the gun is off to the left of the body. Move it up to his shoulder.
taurus: No point trying to redo the taurus reload, I personally love the taurus reload on era. Your gani looks fine and wonderful, but the era gani looks better. ctrl + v D:
Tommy Gun: Again with the down view looking like he's being poked in the eye. Put it over his shoulder. Left view, both hands are on the far side of the gun. Move the left hand to the front side so he's holding onto the handle. Right view, same thing but with right hand. Take off the arm of the right hand too, floating hand will look better than a floating arm. Up view: looks fine.
I beleive thats all, and good luck |
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