Give me some tips

[Rapidwolve]

I'm new to web design, but I've been making a website for a system new to Graal that I plan on releasing in the future. I made this from scratch, the layout and stuff was made by me, I didn't copy and paste from anywhere. I know it looks like myspace kind of (this will not be a social networking site), but as I said im new to web design and im really not that creative.

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Please give me any ideas, tips, etc. Keep in mind im new to this. Oh and don't mind the domain name it will be changed