rate plz

RavenTelvecho · #1 05-10-2002, 08:52 AM

rate my snd lv plz

RavenTelvecho · #2 05-10-2002, 08:53 AM

yikes i spotted a tile error upper right sorry ignore that please.

DiabloSK · #3 05-10-2002, 10:10 AM

very nice 10/10

iniquitus · #4 05-10-2002, 10:23 AM

This is different from what we usualy see (+1 right there)

A bit too many waves in your water (especialy since it's not flowing into anything)

Stay away from using the grass tiles in your water to form perfect little circles-- one circle is ok, maybe two, but i see 12 of the grass circles. ugh. try making creative shapes with them

The spot where the watter makes the shape of an eye is a little spooky

I'd loose it.

Feels a bit open, maybe add an island with a tree in the center or something.

Fencing looks random and out of place.

Try working with different grass tiles, right now all I see are flowers and weeds.

I hate mushrooms, but maybe some people like being blocked by a stupid fungi

your choice weather you want it or not, I won't count it against your level.

Is there a resturant nearby? Food plates on the table outside? Oh my!

Maybe more space arround the table, or splitting up the table into seperate tables and make a nicer place to sit and hang out

I would need to see the connecting levels to judge it more. But it feels like it's going nowhere.

Overall, nice level, it would go up no prob on any of the playerworlds, but lacks thought into the reasoning behind it's exsistance. 6/10

Urizen

Spark910 · #5 05-11-2002, 12:34 AM

Thats nice i'd suggest taking a job on:
Faheria !
They look for level makers like that!

NotoriousBLT · #6 05-11-2002, 12:41 AM

Nice, 9/10

RavenTelvecho · #7 05-11-2002, 03:26 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by iniquitus
This is different from what we usualy see (+1 right there)

A bit too many waves in your water (especialy since it's not flowing into anything)

Stay away from using the grass tiles in your water to form perfect little circles-- one circle is ok, maybe two, but i see 12 of the grass circles. ugh. try making creative shapes with them

The spot where the watter makes the shape of an eye is a little spooky I'd loose it.

Feels a bit open, maybe add an island with a tree in the center or something.

Fencing looks random and out of place.

Try working with different grass tiles, right now all I see are flowers and weeds.

I hate mushrooms, but maybe some people like being blocked by a stupid fungi your choice weather you want it or not, I won't count it against your level.

Is there a resturant nearby? Food plates on the table outside? Oh my!

Maybe more space arround the table, or splitting up the table into seperate tables and make a nicer place to sit and hang out

I would need to see the connecting levels to judge it more. But it feels like it's going nowhere.

Overall, nice level, it would go up no prob on any of the playerworlds, but lacks thought into the reasoning behind it's exsistance. 6/10

Urizen

I made it for unholynation there used to be a waterfall on top of this lv.

RavenTelvecho · #8 05-11-2002, 03:27 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Spark910
Thats nice i'd suggest taking a job on:
Faheria !
They look for level makers like that!

Mmmmkay is helping me with lvs... he says i have good potenshal (dont know how to spell it o.O) and he is willing to help me spot out things I can improve on. After a little more practise he said I could make it.

haunter · #9 05-11-2002, 04:29 AM

Make the river run all the way through, or make a lake/pond at the end