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Old 04-07-2002, 06:09 AM
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It's an older level I had. I decided to make more around it, so I have three to finish.

The coast is the only thing I changed that is noticable, but if you haven't seen the older version, here's the new one.

Rate it 1-10 and tell why.

This will probably get ripped, but hey.


*added* The images did not show up, so the tree images at the top left are missing, and you cannot see the tiles. (in second screenshot.)
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with light effects.
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Old 04-07-2002, 06:15 AM
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Old 04-07-2002, 06:16 AM
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8

Good level over all. Some tiles there that belong on a walkway but you made them almost blend in. The house is nice only it would look more realistic being supported by stilts.

The shore hs to mant peninsula thingers.
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Old 04-07-2002, 06:17 AM
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The shore hs to mant peninsula thingers.
ouch. i see that.

I was in a hurry because i wanted to post a level. :[
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Old 04-07-2002, 06:18 AM
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Its ok.
The top bits nice (besides that bit top left but you said that).
The rivers a little straight though, try making it meander more.
The wat is a little plain.
Try adding some more waves and a few rocks into it.
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Old 04-07-2002, 06:37 AM
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Re: Rate this.

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Originally posted by Torankusu
It's an older level I had. I decided to make more around it, so I have three to finish.

The coast is the only thing I changed that is noticable, but if you haven't seen the older version, here's the new one.

Rate it 1-10 and tell why.

This will probably get ripped, but hey.


*added* The images did not show up, so the tree images at the top left are missing, and you cannot see the tiles. (in second screenshot.)
I would say somewhere between 7 - 8 depending how hard I would judge it

The light effetcs looks really nice... otherwise it is like to straight pathways, waters, a bit to undetailed water, the sand at the bottom should use a bit more variety of tiles and also add a bit more grass there maybe?!

Well... good work ^_^
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Old 04-07-2002, 07:09 AM
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torankusu. finish the bottom.
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Old 04-07-2002, 12:58 PM
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torankusu. finish the bottom.
i hate those tiles.
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Old 04-07-2002, 07:56 PM
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i hate those tiles.
TORANKUSU, THERE IS A BIG TILE ERROR IN THE TOP LEFT
Other than that it's really nice, I'll give it a 7.5!

Edit:
Looks like you fixed it in the second screenshot, <3.
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Old 04-08-2002, 02:24 AM
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TORANKUSU, THERE IS A BIG TILE ERROR IN THE TOP LEFT
Other than that it's really nice, I'll give it a 7.5!

Edit:
Looks like you fixed it in the second screenshot, <3.
hey check the "added" part of my first post. :[

alt1 = no images.
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Old 04-08-2002, 03:37 AM
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Old 04-08-2002, 04:44 AM
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i hate those tiles.
those tiles rule. i love those tiles!
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Old 04-26-2002, 08:44 AM
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those tiles rule. i love those tiles!
they confuse me.
I don't like using them.
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Old 04-26-2002, 08:19 PM
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Gotta change the sand up. What I like to do to give it a natural feel is take the sand tile next to the one you use set it as the entire ground. Then take the sand tile that you used and just go anal dragging it around every which way over the sand tile that is set as the main one. It gives it a natural look. Then after you have a nice mixture go in and add the little rocks. After that go in and add the big rocks but not as thick as the little rocks.

Maybe thats a little confusing but it works for me.
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