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Old 10-10-2007, 03:51 PM
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another random thing I made lately
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Old 10-10-2007, 03:58 PM
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Again, that looks totally blurry. I think you need to change that, its not really appealing.
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Old 10-10-2007, 03:59 PM
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I really like that Your getting better ^_^ Soon you might do tidyer lines, then itll be pro
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Old 10-10-2007, 04:35 PM
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Again, that looks totally blurry. I think you need to change that, its not really appealing.
yeah i think so too, alot of people say my work is far too blurry
galdor and a few others gave me great advice
im redoing it right now.
gonna post it when its done



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Old 10-10-2007, 11:06 PM
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Ok, redid it.
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Old 10-11-2007, 02:01 AM
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Much better with the new one I can actually make out what the main idea is.
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Old 10-11-2007, 02:36 AM
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Its nice...the tumbnail looks nicer then the image. lol
I only say that because..it looks blurred.
But, when its zoomed out to like 30% the original size, it looks nice. lol
Cause when its zoomed out that far, it looks sharper and not so blurry.
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Old 10-11-2007, 02:42 AM
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Its nice...the tumbnail looks nicer then the image. lol
I only say that because..it looks blurred.
But, when its zoomed out to like 30% the original size, it looks nice. lol
Cause when its zoomed out that far, it looks sharper and not so blurry.
Haha yeah, I noticed that too.

Thumbnail is awesome, the actual image is... not so awesome. Its not bad, but, it can be a lot better.
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Old 10-11-2007, 02:47 PM
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New one does look better, but it looks alot like you are not drawing with a 100 percent opacity, which you should do, really. I like your style and your ideas, they are awesome, but your work can be improved alot! Dont give up
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Old 10-11-2007, 02:55 PM
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Problem is you're painting it like you're sketching a rough drawing. The shapes need to be much more defined and clear. Definitely looks like it's missing the touch-up stage. You should go back over it and define the shapes, and clear up the 'scribbles'.
Really like the lighting on the last one though.
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