Green Rifle

Dante55555 · #1 03-18-2007, 06:21 PM

I still cant get onto graal on a morning thanks to my stupid internet so i decided to do a bit more GFX. Couldnt find the green rifle in my images so i just took the template of the red rifle and completly re modeled a green rifle.
This time, CONSTRUCTIVE critacism plz.
Thx.

godofwarares · #2 03-18-2007, 06:34 PM

Looks very good, but I personally think the grip is too short :x
Make it 1-2 pixels longer and it'll look great

Dante55555 · #3 03-18-2007, 06:41 PM

Thx. Erm heres The gun edited to 1-2 pixels I think 2 pixels is a bit too long to be honest.

Also added some bullets but didnt go into much detail because im reconsidering them due to the fact they look like giant bogeys.

godofwarares · #4 03-18-2007, 06:52 PM

Looks good

Dante55555 · #5 03-18-2007, 07:01 PM

Green Pistols as well

Leoxx · #6 03-18-2007, 07:26 PM

overall i think its pretty good, i hope i see it in game
the only thing i dont like though is that handle thing near the barrel
the green pistols are good too

bahamutstevetff · #7 03-18-2007, 07:31 PM

i hope its called something more creative than green rifle and green pistol....

Dante55555 · #8 03-18-2007, 07:51 PM

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i hope its called something more creative than green rifle and green pistol....

Lol, thats about how creative zone gets, Red, Blue, Pulser, Ap-, Rifle, Pistol .. How many guns have those phrases is it?

Heres something more "Creative" for you. I call it Twin Blade

Leoxx · #9 03-18-2007, 08:03 PM

OMG, NOW I WILL PWN WITH SABRE AND THAT xD
it looks awsome

bahamutstevetff · #10 03-18-2007, 08:30 PM

call it twin phaser... or super nerd buster

Leoxx · #11 03-18-2007, 08:43 PM

i think the majority of zone would like super nerd buster xD

Dante55555 · #12 03-18-2007, 09:06 PM

I think the busted noobs would have something to say about that xD. I wouldn't be added anyway, Gani ers already have enough on there hands and Sayian will most likely be all "THAT SUX!"

hehe

Huwajux · #13 03-18-2007, 10:03 PM

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Originally Posted by Dante55555

Thx. Erm heres The gun edited to 1-2 pixels I think 2 pixels is a bit too long to be honest.

Also added some bullets but didnt go into much detail because im reconsidering them due to the fact they look like giant bogeys.

Looks a lot better than the current one! (Just a RR with recolour). Probably replace it with this one.

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Originally Posted by Dante55555

Green Pistols as well

Don't go there. -_-

Dante55555 · #14 03-18-2007, 10:35 PM

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Originally Posted by Huwajux

Looks a lot better than the current one! (Just a RR with recolour). Probably replace it with this one.

Thx

That would be cool. Id love to have my own GFX in the game :P

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Originally Posted by Huwajux

Don't go there. -_-

Lol.. Alright..

colin012 · #15 03-18-2007, 10:50 PM

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Originally Posted by Dante55555

I still cant get onto graal on a morning thanks to my stupid internet so i decided to do a bit more GFX. Couldnt find the green rifle in my images so i just took the template of the red rifle and completly re modeled a green rifle.
This time, CONSTRUCTIVE critacism plz.
Thx.

Good just round off the barrle by removing the outline on the far corrners and add the hole in the barrle in the down veiw for better berspective.

Dante55555 · #16 03-18-2007, 10:59 PM

Thx for the contribution :P I cant believe i forgot to actually put the hole in the gun xD! Anyway, heres the new version and also 1 without the ammo clip on it, someone said it would look better without

colin012 · #17 03-18-2007, 11:05 PM

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Originally Posted by Dante55555

Thx for the contribution :P I cant believe i forgot to actually put the hole in the gun xD! Anyway, heres the new version and also 1 without the ammo clip on it, someone said it would look better without

Almost their. Put a hole in the side veiws and get rid on the one in the toip veiw the tip would cover it off. Other then that it's shmexy

Dante55555 · #18 03-18-2007, 11:10 PM

Hmm not too sure about the holes in the side view.. But, looks alright

Leoxx · #19 03-18-2007, 11:16 PM

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Originally Posted by Dante55555

someone said it would look better without

thx

, i think it looks alot better now

Dante55555 · #20 03-18-2007, 11:20 PM

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Originally Posted by Leoxx

thx

, i think it looks alot better now

Yea i actually agree with you, looks better without it, look at my new sexy rifle being held xD

Leoxx · #21 03-18-2007, 11:26 PM

lol nice

colin012 · #22 03-18-2007, 11:26 PM

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Yea i actually agree with you, looks better without it, look at my new sexy rifle being held xD

I want one!

Dante55555 · #23 03-19-2007, 02:12 AM

Nice to know it looks good xD

pooper200000 · #24 03-19-2007, 02:18 AM

I don't know if youll like my suggestion. Do more like minishading from side to side on the gun make it shorter and whats that dot for where a pole thing comes out by the barrel? i really like the actual bullets though

Leoxx · #25 03-19-2007, 03:40 AM

i think the size makes it look different from the majority of zone's weapons (in other words i think it makes it stand out and it will make the trials say WTF?!, just like how the photon was)

Dante55555 · #26 03-19-2007, 04:18 AM

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Originally Posted by pooper200000

I don't know if youll like my suggestion. Do more like minishading from side to side on the gun make it shorter and whats that dot for where a pole thing comes out by the barrel? i really like the actual bullets though

... Dot thing?.. Eh? I dont understand a word ur saying O_O. Thanks for the erm, tips. I guess.

dude2020 · #27 03-19-2007, 04:23 AM

Better than a re color.

i like it but i wouldn't use it

Huwajux · #28 03-19-2007, 02:55 PM

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Originally Posted by Dante55555

Yea i actually agree with you, looks better without it, look at my new sexy rifle being held xD

EW RUBBISH GANI ALERT!

It looks like the back of the gun is so heavy it's making you tilt backwards. :P
I will gani it for you. =D

anubis_wing · #29 03-19-2007, 05:39 PM

Nice, it's almost as good as Sayians!

Dante55555 · #30 03-19-2007, 09:07 PM

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Originally Posted by Huwajux

EW RUBBISH GANI ALERT!

It looks like the back of the gun is so heavy it's making you tilt backwards. :P
I will gani it for you. =D

Ty, id love that.

pooper200000 · #31 03-19-2007, 09:50 PM

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... Dot thing?.. Eh? I dont understand a word ur saying O_O. Thanks for the erm, tips. I guess.

the black dot hilghted in red. Its in the very middle of it sorry my mouse is funny so thats the best i can get... sorry its a bmp also

I dunno its just a dot and I want more shading along parts that would stick out since right now it looks like the whole thing has a small spotlight on one end. More shading of individual parts...

Dante55555 · #32 03-20-2007, 11:42 PM

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the black dot hilghted in red. Its in the very middle of it sorry my mouse is funny so thats the best i can get... sorry its a bmp also

I dunno its just a dot and I want more shading along parts that would stick out since right now it looks like the whole thing has a small spotlight on one end. More shading of individual parts...

.. Once again im confused, i thought i understood what u meant untill i actually looked at the picture and it basicly looks like u just scribbled all over the picture xD. I understand what u mean by shading but in all fairness, who the fk stops in the middle of a game and gos.. HEY! THATS NOT SHADED PROERLY!...

pooper200000 · #33 03-20-2007, 11:43 PM

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.. Once again im confused, i thought i understood what u meant untill i actually looked at the picture and it basicly looks like u just scribbled all over the picture xD. I understand what u mean by shading but in all fairness, who the fk stops in the middle of a game and gos.. HEY! THATS NOT SHADED PROERLY!...

no one but if usually if something looks good it has mini shading. Ill try again Im really bad at paint.... realy really bad... will edit and add it

Edit: ok do what I said before the blue indicates some places more minishading and having it like pop out should be and the red area is the area I was wondering about because it looks like a big old dot..

Dante55555 · #34 03-23-2007, 02:43 AM

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Originally Posted by pooper200000

no one but if usually if something looks good it has mini shading. Ill try again Im really bad at paint.... realy really bad... will edit and add it

Edit: ok do what I said before the blue indicates some places more minishading and having it like pop out should be and the red area is the area I was wondering about because it looks like a big old dot..

Thx for pointing that out, adjusted it and hope its to your liking.. Or at least leaning a bit more in that direction

. I do think its come along nicely and would actually love to use it :P Darky baby, please show me what it would look like if it where Ganid right if you get a chance please, thx. <3

pooper200000 · #35 03-23-2007, 02:55 AM

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Thx for pointing that out, adjusted it and hope its to your liking.. Or at least leaning a bit more in that direction

. I do think its come along nicely and would actually love to use it :P Darky baby, please show me what it would look like if it where Ganid right if you get a chance please, thx. <3

your getting there. Sorry I still have some more things i want a little changed just a bit though. I like the mini shading that looks very nice. Try fixing the area so its not a dot its just obnoxious looking with a big old dot. Thats about all I have to say I think its gone from pretty good to almost sayain. keyword almost. admit it you love my bmps XD!

Dante55555 · #36 03-23-2007, 03:05 AM

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your getting there. Sorry I still have some more things i want a little changed just a bit though. I like the mini shading that looks very nice. Try fixing the area so its not a dot its just obnoxious looking with a big old dot. Thats about all I have to say I think its gone from pretty good to almost sayain. keyword almost. admit it you love my bmps XD!

I hate them! But they are helpful.. Yea i was gonna change this because it didnt look right.. What would you suggest i change it to? Just shading?

pooper200000 · #37 03-23-2007, 03:06 AM

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I hate them! But they are helpful.. Yea i was gonna change this because it didnt look right.. What would you suggest i change it to? Just shading?

see the red section get rid of that dot area there and make it a part of the gun thats not a dot it looks icky. shade the new part well though

Dante55555 · #38 03-23-2007, 03:13 AM

There, now hopefully i can call this FINISHED

pooper200000 · #39 03-23-2007, 03:29 AM

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There, now hopefully i can call this FINISHED

setnick In love. May its a little too shiny but I wouldn't mess with it it looks very good

it looks like an enhanced pulsar thats shortened though now :'(

SayianOozaru · #40 03-23-2007, 03:35 AM