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Old 05-21-2006, 04:24 AM
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Rate and Comment: Same old Story

I don't post my work here often, in fact, it's probably due to because I do very little work. But I got bored tonight while listening to music and I started working on my cliffing and it evolved into this.

If you comment please include Constructive Critisizm (Or regular Critisizm I don't really care) and a rating from 1-10.
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Old 05-21-2006, 11:45 AM
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Old 05-21-2006, 02:29 PM
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I really like it, has a nice feeling with the house there and stuff ^_^
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Old 05-21-2006, 02:34 PM
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Old 05-21-2006, 04:17 PM
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Tile errors in the cliff, a common error when making the diagonal cliffing, people don't use both parts to it, which would give it a smoother transition. I also dislike how you ended the multi-layered grass tiles with that pole on both sides, just makes it look like you were using copy/paste. The detail in the level is good, but I'm not a fan of the layout. 6-7/10

On a sidenote, I really dislike that tileset. To me, it looks like everything is radioactive.
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Old 05-21-2006, 05:58 PM
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Nice House
Tileset colors really dont blend together at all.
A lot of flowers but ok...6.5/10
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Old 05-21-2006, 06:37 PM
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whooa hey mikey i think he likes it
4/5 (onoz im diffrent!!!)
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Old 05-21-2006, 07:13 PM
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Make a webgif for the farthest left house post bottom so that the green isn't around it. That's annoying. Also, the border around the door looks irregular without the bottom tiles to it. This is probably in the tileset, but I'd say lose the half-kubol/half-bush hybrid plant things. Otherwise, I'd give it about an 8/10.
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Old 05-22-2006, 05:39 AM
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no really

The blue trees were always my favorite you know. I dont do levels much but I like it, because it is not one of those OVERDETAILED levels which seem to be 'in'.
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Old 05-22-2006, 06:03 AM
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- The hole in the roof that the chimney is coming out of is 1 tile too long, it should be square.
- The bottoms of the door jamb is missing.
- Using the posts to end those grass-to-grass tile lines is tacky.
- I despise half bush, half roosh things.
- Someone already mentioned the left-most post on the house I think.

That's all I noticed. Other than that it looks pretty nice. Nothing pivotal, but a nice bit of a world. I hate the grass colour though. >(
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Old 05-26-2006, 11:51 AM
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Dont like the tileset and I dont like the tiling
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