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Old 06-04-2005, 03:15 AM
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First Brushed Graphic :X

Yeah iv been doing graphics for awhile and i dont think im good.. i know im not lol.. so could i have some constructive critism, and tips on how i could improve my work :O The car is my first Brushed Graphic, the rest are just paint only graphics

PS: Click on the sword because its blurry.. its all in gray and light blue.. its based off a Templo de Christo. A Templar knight sword.
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Old 06-04-2005, 03:21 AM
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The car is pretty cool.
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Old 06-04-2005, 05:06 AM
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The top sword is nice, I don't care for the unrealistic fire on the side of a pretty-well done realistic car... But it's a nice car. I like your (Staff?) Weapon too.. Window is too dark to see any shading.
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Old 06-04-2005, 10:02 AM
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I think the car needs somew more shading round the edges, so it doesn't looks like a shape, rather than tthe desired look of a car.
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Old 06-04-2005, 06:01 PM
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The front end of your car seems a bit un-natural, dont you think it should be a bit more square, and not be connecting right to the roof?
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