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Old 01-09-2005, 01:17 AM
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What do YOU think?

I live for constructive critisism.
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Old 01-09-2005, 01:54 AM
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Whats the first one, a rock? The second one is a tree, I know that one.

I will only critisize the tree, since I know its actually a tree :

- The stump looks good, a bit dark.
- I think the leaves are really dark. Hard to see anything else.

Good though.

[EDIT] Oh, I see, its a moutain! Sorry. [/EDIT]
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Old 01-09-2005, 02:03 AM
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Old 01-09-2005, 02:13 AM
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Whats the first one, a rock? The second one is a tree, I know that one.

I will only critisize the tree, since I know its actually a tree :

- The stump looks good, a bit dark.
- I think the leaves are really dark. Hard to see anything else.

Good though.

[EDIT] Oh, I see, its a moutain! Sorry. [/EDIT]
Actually, I was making a scenery, and the sun was going to be peaking from behind the tree, but I gave up on the project early, so I salvaged the mountain and the tree from what was left. :P

That might explain the dark colors on the tree. :P
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Old 01-09-2005, 03:06 AM
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Actually, I was making a scenery, and the sun was going to be peaking from behind the tree, but I gave up on the project early, so I salvaged the mountain and the tree from what was left. :P

That might explain the dark colors on the tree. :P
Oh, you should try to finish it, it will look better.
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Old 01-09-2005, 03:33 AM
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Oh, you should try to finish it, it will look better.
It was a pretty big project, and I was sleepy, and everytime I stop in the middle of a piece, then go back to work on it more, the stuff I do the second time looks horrible and ruins it all.

I just made this, I know it looks like bum, but I suck a peoples, and I won't get better without attempting. That's why I love the constructive critisism. :P
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Old 01-09-2005, 03:52 AM
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It was a pretty big project, and I was sleepy, and everytime I stop in the middle of a piece, then go back to work on it more, the stuff I do the second time looks horrible and ruins it all.

I just made this, I know it looks like bum, but I suck a peoples, and I won't get better without attempting. That's why I love the constructive critisism. :P
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Old 01-09-2005, 03:52 AM
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Old 01-09-2005, 04:04 AM
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You can. Everyone can draw, and with enough practice, everyone can draw well. Some require a bit more practice than others though.
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Old 01-09-2005, 04:06 AM
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Old 01-09-2005, 04:12 AM
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You can. Everyone can draw, and with enough practice, everyone can draw well. Some require a bit more practice than others though.
I think I would need a bit more practice then everyone esle.. I'm lucky if I can draw a stick figure.

I've tried to do Graphics, but they turned out really bad.. lol
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Old 01-09-2005, 04:19 AM
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The first two look nice. The mountains don't really have much color, but then again it depends on the lighting of the area... The tree actually looks great, I didn't notice a problem of color, it is just dark and would probably fit in best with other dark colors.

The character looks bad because it is a realisticly shaped human with a graal head. You might want to draw a neck and a head next time, and maybe give him some room for his vital organs as well... Too skinny. Just by a little bit, though.
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Old 01-09-2005, 04:25 AM
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That 2nd Picture is a Vulcano? It looks liek a 1/2 Tree but is a vulcano right?
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Old 01-09-2005, 06:00 AM
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Mreh, ok.
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Old 01-09-2005, 07:37 AM
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That 2nd Picture is a Vulcano? It looks liek a 1/2 Tree but is a vulcano right?
It's mountains, it was for the scenery, it was to be across from the tree, but above a lake.
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Old 01-09-2005, 07:39 AM
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The first two look nice. The mountains don't really have much color, but then again it depends on the lighting of the area... The tree actually looks great, I didn't notice a problem of color, it is just dark and would probably fit in best with other dark colors.

The character looks bad because it is a realisticly shaped human with a graal head. You might want to draw a neck and a head next time, and maybe give him some room for his vital organs as well... Too skinny. Just by a little bit, though.
My anatomy isn't great, I know, the guy looks like bum bum from the waste up.

What about these little guys, eh?
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Old 01-09-2005, 09:20 AM
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Old 01-09-2005, 09:47 AM
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Old 01-09-2005, 09:52 AM
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Ah, my bad. Nice graphical work :]
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Old 01-09-2005, 10:51 AM
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Ah, my bad. Nice graphical work :]
Thanks, I am trying to do something really fun with those little people, more news ahead, I'll keep up with this thread.
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Old 01-09-2005, 11:36 AM
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Old 01-09-2005, 11:55 AM
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Old 01-09-2005, 05:58 PM
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It's mountains, it was for the scenery, it was to be across from the tree, but above a lake.
He's not talking about the mountain. He says the second one looks like a volcano (the tree), and it kind of does if you look at it a certain way
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Old 01-09-2005, 08:10 PM
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Yeah it really looks like a volcano, the tree part looks like the volcano and the green stuff looks like smoke.
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