Leet, or not leet? (Rate my level)

[DarkDragoon_Lloyd]

OK, well, I had a bit of time, so I decided to make a level...

Since from what I can see, this is the new "style" with levels on the forums, I decided to make my levels with a similar idea...


Anyways, here is the level... I think I may have added a bit too much detail, cuz there was barely any room to squeeze in stuff when I was finishing it, but oh well...
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[protagonist]

5/10


I like the layout, but I'm really not fond of the clutter style.

[draygin]

What antago.. erm I mean Protaganist said.. (sorry read your sig and had to say it)

Also the red trees look really bad in the level. I recommend replacing those entirly. Aside from that its overly cluttered. But the lay out is indeed nice.

[dorfindel]

It looks great except for a couple of things, so 8/10 but the problem is that it looks a little hard to walk around in o.O

[YoungTwist]

1. dorfindel is right, this is nice but its hard to walk around in, lol. But its nice.

2. draygin is right too. the red tress look bad in the level

I like some of the water and the lil clifts, and the shadow's. Its a like level i give it a 7.5/10

[DarkDragoon_Lloyd]

X_x

I just tried to play the level...
It's impossible to get around...
And I was trying to add some extra color to the level with the red trees, but whatever... =/

Thanks for the advice?

(I am still attempting to improve)

[wonderboysp2p]

4/10

it gave me a headache when i saw it
EDIT: 3/10 i was just going through it with a magnifying glass.. yeah im bored and i saw quite a few tile errors... nice creativity though

[DarkDragoon_Lloyd]

Originally posted by wonderboysp2p
4/10

it gave me a headache when i saw it
EDIT: 3/10 i was just going through it with a magnifying glass.. yeah im bored and i saw quite a few tile errors... nice creativity though

Quite a few? Ehm... 4?
And... 3/10?
That would be a rating given to a **** that is still using predefined object and doesn't know what detail is, but whatever... =/

[wonderboysp2p]

im over critical when it comes to levels X_x

[zell12]

I think the level is nice, but your shadowing is inconstant.

[Eric_1337]

No offense, I'm going off-topic here, but when i post a plain level like this, I get a **** load of comments about how you've seen this before and blah blah, and now you're giving lloyd above-average ratings?

I'd rate a 4/10

Is this an Event?! We should call it "jump the grass objects!" well, no one would win, you wouldn't be able to get through it x.x,
lloyd you gotta make thoughs events easier man! We've got ****ies that wanna play too.
-over-crowdedness

-tile errors

-style is kewl, but it's "same old same old" as many of you put it.

-cliffs look ugly

[draygin]

Originally posted by Eric_1337
No offense, I'm going off-topic here, but when i post a plain level like this, I get a **** load of comments about how you've seen this before and blah blah, and now you're giving lloyd above-average ratings?

I'd rate a 4/10

Is this an Event?! We should call it "jump the grass objects!" well, no one would win, you wouldn't be able to get through it x.x,
lloyd you gotta make thoughs events easier man! We've got ****ies that wanna play too.
-over-crowdedness

-tile errors

-style is kewl, but it's "same old same old" as many of you put it.

-cliffs look ugly

I didn't rate it, I just posted things I thought was wrong with it.

[Androk]

It's TOO Cluttered, The Red trees don't fit, because the level has Too much color with them. There are ALOT of tile errors. I am not fat.

[zell12]

There are no other ways to design levels, though I could find a way! If we all tried to not post the same levels then we would end up posting levels all black or something.

[MarkB]

not bad, 6.5/10

I am not big on the bushes with tree trunks >.>

[DarkDragoon_Lloyd]

Lemme go through the level again and look at it...
From what you guys say, there are a lot of tile errors...

So... basically if I were going to fix it up I would need to:

-Remove red trees
-Fix tile errors
-Remove some of the detail
-Fix the shadows(? Don't see anything wrong with them, though)

[DarkDragoon_Lloyd]

Updated level:
-removed red trees
-fixed tile errors
-redetailed
-less crowded
-able to get around

Reevaluate me!

[protagonist]

9/10

That actually looks like something I might have made, I would have had a little more detail but there you go.

[DarkDragoon_Lloyd]

Originally posted by protagonist
9/10

That actually looks like something I might have made, I would have had a little more detail but there you go.

First there is too much detail, and now there is not enough?

[zell12]

I don't even bother posting my levers for others to judge or rate because not everyones style is the same. Don't try to please others, if you think you did a nice job and it looks nice, then thats good enough.

[protagonist]

Originally posted by DarkDragoon_Lloyd


First there is too much detail, and now there is not enough?

There is a fence, on one side the grass is green and on the other side it is covered in crap. You want to be on the fence.

[funnylinkwantsbomys]

Originally posted by protagonist



There is a fence, on one side the grass is green and on the other side it is covered in crap. You want to be on the fence.

antago

[Aknts]

Originally posted by funnylinkwantsbomys
antago

HE IS NOT ANTAGO!!!!!!


Anyways im sorry Lloyd but I do not like the level. =\

[Eric_1337]

make the cliffs less pointy

[TripleE]

Originally posted by DarkDragoon_Lloyd
OK, well, I had a bit of time, so I decided to make a level...

Since from what I can see, this is the new "style" with levels on the forums, I decided to make my levels with a similar idea...


Anyways, here is the level... I think I may have added a bit too much detail, cuz there was barely any room to squeeze in stuff when I was finishing it, but oh well...
=/

Now tell us all why you couldnt have just remade the Bravo Overworld with good level quality like this instead of letting them rip Era =/

[DarkDragoon_Lloyd]

Originally posted by TripleE

Now tell us all why you couldnt have just remade the Bravo Overworld with good level quality like this instead of letting them rip Era =/

... We were, but then the manager decided he would rather have a modern server, so we deleted the one we were making... =/

[MKSLAYER]

its prety good like most people said red trees also the water on the plateau has tile errors in it if you look on the tile set ther is a brown 2x2 square thats brown with a black dot in the middle those should go inbetween the main ones