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Old 06-25-2007, 05:51 AM
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Im starting to build for my server while it gets approved, heres one of the overworld levels. Let me know what you think about it, and if there is anything i can improve let me know! KTHXBYE

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Old 06-25-2007, 06:34 AM
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Too many flowers/butterflys/turtles. Overuse of the grass tiling. Perhaps some elevation? Cliffing? Water?

The tileset offers alot: use it.
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Old 06-25-2007, 06:56 AM
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Too many flowers/butterflys/turtles. Overuse of the grass tiling. Perhaps some elevation? Cliffing? Water?

The tileset offers alot: use it.
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Old 06-25-2007, 07:00 AM
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Well can you guys help me, its going to be for my server I\'m making.
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Old 06-25-2007, 07:35 AM
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Why did you put a backslash before the single apostrophe, are you in scripting mode or something o-o.
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Old 06-25-2007, 07:40 AM
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it's his browser, and I think it's a good level, just erase some of the grass tiles and make a cliff or two and add some bushes / stones
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Old 06-25-2007, 07:49 AM
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Ok I may just been somewhat ummmm intoxicated but I actually see what he wanted to create which is just impossible with the classic tileset....but I SEE IT.
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Old 06-25-2007, 07:55 AM
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Ok I may just been somewhat ummmm intoxicated but I actually see what he wanted to create which is just impossible with the classic tileset....but I SEE IT.
he tried to make a farm / patch of growing trees with some baddies beside it with a lot of lag-flies
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Old 06-25-2007, 12:27 PM
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Old 06-25-2007, 01:13 PM
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You should try to use different tiles and make it less repetative. Try to check on other levelshowcase topics and get your inspiration from those
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Old 06-25-2007, 04:14 PM
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You should use the flowers from the old tileset (red)
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Old 06-25-2007, 07:06 PM
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umm.... wow, id say like -1/10 cause that looks like it took some npc duplicating and then deleting grass tiles...
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Old 06-26-2007, 12:02 AM
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umm.... wow, id say like -1/10 cause that looks like it took some npc duplicating and then deleting grass tiles...
wtf..
I hope you're being sarcastic.
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Old 06-26-2007, 03:19 AM
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:/ that didn't help him in the slightest dude, use constructive critisism :/

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Old 06-27-2007, 02:46 AM
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ok, constructive critisism:

don't make a level with no depth, add a house or a tree, or even a cliff = )
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