A Red Sports Car

Darkyoshi12345 · #1 09-15-2006, 08:28 AM

Uh, a Graal car I was just working on. What do you think I should do to improve it?

Sam · #2 09-15-2006, 08:33 AM

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Originally Posted by Darkyoshi12345

Uh, a Graal car I was just working on. What do you think I should do to improve it?

It's not bad, but a sports car is looking more "fast", slenderise it.

Redwizard · #3 09-15-2006, 10:09 AM

maybe try lengthening the bonnet a bit more and adding more dramatic shading

Crono · #4 09-15-2006, 10:23 AM

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Originally Posted by Sam

It's not bad, but a sports car is looking more "fast", slenderise it.

You would never think a Skyline is fast but it actually is, though it looks big and family car-ish.

http://images.163car.com/downloadIma...5811134907.jpg

Sam · #5 09-15-2006, 10:40 AM

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Originally Posted by Gerami

You would never think a Skyline is fast but it actually is, though it looks big and family car-ish.

For me a sports car have to look like the red one. A spoiler and a big sized engine isn't enough. A spoiler doesnt makes a sportscar out of a tank.

Zero Hour · #6 09-15-2006, 12:56 PM

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Originally Posted by Sam

For me a sports car have to look like the red one. A spoiler and a big sized engine isn't enough. A spoiler doesnt makes a sportscar out of a tank.

Wow that's a long car. Instantly made me think of a specific Family Guy episode - but that's another story.

I agree, the current car is a bit chunky.

Tom · #7 09-15-2006, 01:42 PM

Is that the episode where he buys a really long car and goes in and out of a bridge? lol

Sam · #8 09-15-2006, 02:20 PM

For all of you who rellay don't know: this red car is a Jaguar E-Type (SAE-PS): 265 from 1965.

Zero Hour · #9 09-15-2006, 02:36 PM

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Originally Posted by Sam

from 1965.

So you would have been about 50 at that time?

Darkyoshi12345 · #10 09-16-2006, 01:00 AM

How's this now?

Tom · #11 09-16-2006, 01:12 AM

Guys youve sort of strayed off the perpose of this thread lol.

Id suggest adding some reflections, to give it a sort of shine

And maybe work on the AA on some of the lines.

It also really lacks contrast, although top-down may have been a hard angle for this, it just seems very flat.

Darkyoshi12345 · #12 09-16-2006, 01:24 AM

It lacks depth, you mean.

Tom · #13 09-16-2006, 01:54 AM

That's the word i was looking for lol

Darkyoshi12345 · #14 09-16-2006, 07:50 AM

Okay, how about this?

Has more depth and AA.