The CND-Oppressor

Codein · #1 11-26-2005, 01:11 AM

I'm rather new to making futuristic/sci-fi graphics. Give me your comments and critique

Wind_Master · #2 11-26-2005, 03:14 AM

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Originally Posted by Codein

I'm rather new to making futuristic/sci-fi graphics. Give me your comments and critique

I think its really good. It really fits the "Futuristic" description. I give it a 8/10.

BrAwLeR · #3 11-26-2005, 03:54 AM

Looks like Sayian has a little compatition, 8/10.

Akoalin · #4 11-26-2005, 04:49 AM

It looks great, it reminds me of Zero Wing for some reason. If I were you I'de add a little more shading, it'll look fine without it though.

haunter · #5 11-26-2005, 04:49 AM

The trigger is far too big, and the up/down sprites are a bit confusing (to begin with, which is which?) The shading on the left/right sprites is pretty kickin'. I really like the bullets/plasma bolts too, very nice.

Just try to improve on the up/down sprites. Once I figure out which is which I might be able to give more constructive comments on those.

SayianOozaru · #6 11-26-2005, 04:58 AM

looks weird, but i like it

bahamutstevetff · #7 11-26-2005, 07:13 AM

looks dodgy, but sweet, sayain, eat yer heart out.

Codein · #8 11-26-2005, 11:27 AM

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The trigger is far too big, and the up/down sprites are a bit confusing (to begin with, which is which?) The shading on the left/right sprites is pretty kickin'. I really like the bullets/plasma bolts too, very nice.

Just try to improve on the up/down sprites. Once I figure out which is which I might be able to give more constructive comments on those.

It was a new idea for the trigger. Instead of using your finger, you use your whole hand. It's meant to be a powerful gun, and since I'm guessing you'd need to charge it up, it'd be best using all your hand's strength.

Aye, I agree, the up and dwon sprites are a bit crap. I'll try and improve them.

Thanks for all your comments

Codein · #9 11-26-2005, 11:42 AM

I tried to improve it, but I couldn't do much

Wind_Master · #10 11-26-2005, 04:47 PM

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Originally Posted by Codein

I tried to improve it, but I couldn't do much

Looks great. Good work.

haunter · #11 11-26-2005, 09:47 PM

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Originally Posted by Codein

I tried to improve it, but I couldn't do much

Hrm, the up/down sprites still look wonky.

I suggest taking your work to the Graphics Design section of the forums and have the artists there help you out a bit more before you try and get this uploaded onto Zone.

bahamutstevetff · #12 11-26-2005, 01:24 PM

looks better, absolutely great, sayain u got your wrok cut out go ya.

Codein · #13 11-26-2005, 02:09 PM

Thanks

MrsMastermind · #14 11-26-2005, 04:53 PM

Wow, it looks great, keep it up! 8/10

Codein · #15 11-26-2005, 05:38 PM

Thankyou