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Old 07-01-2003, 03:31 AM
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Oh god... (Rate my level)

Oh god... Not another one! How many can he make!?

Umm, rate, post reason supporting rating.

I think I overdetailed again... =/
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Old 07-01-2003, 03:45 AM
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Nice detailing.
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Old 07-01-2003, 03:47 AM
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Nice waterfall, but as I don't know how it relates to the rest of the world, I cannot really rate it properly, but good job overall.
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Old 07-01-2003, 03:58 AM
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6.5/10

The waterfall is nice, yes. The problem is the miniscule amount of water that feeds it, is simply not enough, and therefore not realistic.
Also, I personally feel the grassy areas are overdetailed. And lastly, I'd estimate 50-60% of that level is dirt, or sand. And of that, the only details contained in it are rocks?
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Old 07-01-2003, 04:08 AM
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7.5/10

You didn't overdetail, you could clump a bit more but I don't know if that's not your style. Judge brought up some very good points, generally waterfalls need fairly large feeder rivers.
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Old 07-01-2003, 05:01 AM
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The runoff river on the second level should be a bit bigger, or something, it looks kinda occward.
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Old 07-01-2003, 11:33 AM
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The runoff river on the second level should be a bit bigger, or something, it looks kinda occward.
yea, there is that bigass 40 foot bohemus river up top that flows into a 2x2 puddle =X
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Old 07-03-2003, 02:18 PM
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I dont like the way you used the Grass on Grass tiles..they look..boring..and to me, the detail on the grass just isn't right..

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