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Old 11-16-2002, 10:05 PM
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My level. Please rate it 1-10.
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Old 11-16-2002, 10:11 PM
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You remembered to attach it this time *Pats Head*

Ok here goes....

The grass in the water looks nice, not seen much of that grass in water before, so thats good. The water its self is good with all 3 shades of water depths. The trees look good where they are sisuated but I dont like the potted plant at the top of the level. The sand by the water is a bit dull, maybe do something like in my attatchment. The grass repeats its self after a while and would be abit boring if you were walking through it.

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Old 11-16-2002, 10:13 PM
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You remembered to attach it this time *Pats Head*

Ok here goes....

The grass in the water looks nice, not seen much of that grass in water before, so thats good. The water its self is good with all 3 shades of water depths. The trees look good where they are sisuated but I dont like the potted plant at the top of the level. The sand by the water is a bit dull, maybe do something like in my attatchment. The grass repeats its self after a while and would be abit boring if you were walking through it.

Sparks Rating: 6/10 Not Bad :0
Lol. I got so overcome in my HTML I forgot the attachment.. so instead of looking like an idiot.. I just deleted the post. x.x I ALMOST did it again.
I've gotten some thinks on the beach too. I'll see what I can do with that. The grass repeats its self? No it doesn't. o.O' I did that by hand, not copy and paste, or any Generator.. Look again..o.O'.
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Old 11-16-2002, 10:34 PM
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yeah, I was about to reply saying ''Level Please'' then it wnet. What I mean by the grass is in IE6 is minimises the images which is good as you can see the whole level, and when you look at it like that you can see down the middle a sort of same pattern... So try some bigger indents or some little stright bits maybe.
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Old 11-16-2002, 10:34 PM
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yeah, I was about to reply saying ''Level Please'' then it wnet. What I mean by the grass is in IE6 is minimises the images which is good as you can see the whole level, and when you look at it like that you can see down the middle a sort of same pattern... So try some bigger indents or some little stright bits maybe. I know there not the same but they are similar down the middle.
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Old 11-16-2002, 10:38 PM
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Oh.. I see. That can be fixed with more grass though. Lol
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Old 11-16-2002, 11:15 PM
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rating: 6/10

becuse i dont think the tiling is done in that level

a 7/10 if u tile it more.
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Old 11-16-2002, 11:33 PM
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too much chunks of grass/dirt together but yet seperated O.o looks weird...

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Old 11-17-2002, 01:16 AM
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Yes I agree, its good, but nothing too new that we haven't seen before.
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Old 11-17-2002, 01:23 AM
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Yes I agree, its good, but nothing too new that we haven't seen before.
Ya, people post these types of levels too much. They're good for servers coasts etc., but they're sort of annoying on here.
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Old 11-17-2002, 01:38 AM
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I give that level 6/10, because It has that nice touch, but if you review it from another angle than the visual candy, it could be more interactive, atleast if it was just for show off :O.
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Old 11-17-2002, 01:55 AM
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Old 11-17-2002, 02:27 AM
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Um..Annoying? You COULD say that, if you ever posted here.. Of course you see levels like that all the time. I made it to see if I could do it.
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Old 11-17-2002, 03:13 AM
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Will you stop spaming, we are talking about levels here and ratings this persons work, its often comments like that which make the posts go off topic. So dont do it as its pathetically annoying. Anyway...

Yes i do agree it is good for coasts as its alot better than just the other tiles in bottom left of tileset.
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Old 11-17-2002, 03:48 AM
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Are you Cortez? 'cause that looks like Cortez's level.
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Old 11-17-2002, 04:14 AM
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I dont know his nickname, i only know his as ''Alexs Friends''

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Old 11-17-2002, 04:26 AM
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Old 11-17-2002, 04:34 AM
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Heh, Spark910, you just went off topic yourself by posting "I don't know his username" If we're gonna be picky..

I would just like to add that if it would be just a regular beach side, it was well done, and earns a 7/10 instead, heh.
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Old 11-17-2002, 05:02 AM
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Yes I did go off topic as someone else did I was replying. And anyway it is ment to be a beach level. But there could be more detail in the grass which I think he is going now and will post a new one.
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Old 11-19-2002, 05:13 AM
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i like the beach tiling, but i think you have to many small dirt patches together, try taking a few out
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