How Does this look? (and ideas)

[Rice2k]

I have not made levels in awhile i just want to know how this look and if you all have any ideas for me.
im not done with it yet i just wanted to take a quick snap shot of it.

[Rice2k]

Here is another update of the level
any ideas for me plz and input would be nice

[papajchris]

whats with the random 1/2 lamp at the bottom of the waterfall? Also, the right side of the mountain has tile errors. Follow the pattern and you can see that every 2 tiles it cuts off. Also the right side needs to be moved right 1 tile it looks like.

[Codein]

You've filled the entire floor with detail, so now it's overdetailed. Try clumping detail together, rather than just randomly placing each tile.

Also, I prefer, like, cornering cliffs so it appears on slant (see attachment).

Furthermore, I see no purpose or direction to the level. Even a path across the river (obviously over a bridge) could do it. Maybe block where you can move with more trees. I dislike big open spaces in levels, but that's just how I personally feel.

However, keep at it, I think you've got potential.

[Rice2k]

Alright im having some trouble finding the right tiles. if someone could help point me in the right direction that would be great. i added the cliff tiles that im having problems with to this post. could someone please help me out a little.

[Crono]

You're off to a decent start, the cliff itself needs some work though. I prefer turning it at a slant, to do that you line up the top and push every "layer" down one. The top of the -> facing cliff is too high. It needs to be brought down a little. I'll try to draw all of this out in paint. In red is the cliff-too-high issue, and in purple is how you get the slant style.



With the purple, you just keep doing that until it aligns itself with the bottom. Try it out and play with it a bit, you'll get it in no time. In the end it should look something like this...

[Rice2k]

gerr i think im getting the idea im still playing with it i just wanted to see if im on the right track.

[Crono]

Ok you're on the right track, now begin pushing each one a tile lower than the last.

[warriors94]

Your cliffs are very square.
Make them have more than 2 or 3 directions.

[DustyPorViva]

Originally Posted by warriors94

Your cliffs are very square.
Make them have more than 2 or 3 directions.

Well the higher the cliffs are, the less room you have to make them more 'natural', because of the way they tile.