er32 (My first Zone gun)

Deas_Voice · #1 06-27-2008, 10:26 AM

i was bored so i started on a outline and ended up coloring it too, i thought it lookt like a Zone Rifle

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here it is:

too small/big?
comments please!

jurre24d · #2 06-27-2008, 01:30 PM

Not my type. Srry

Deas_Voice · #3 06-27-2008, 01:34 PM

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Originally Posted by jurre24d

Not my type. Srry

if you only gona say that, dont post.
give me a comment on what u think of the gun/ something needs to be edited, etc.
"not my type. srry"

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Minomato · #4 06-27-2008, 04:42 PM

What's with the lines on the body of it? They look scrapes/scratches. Was that meant to be part of the gun's detail?

Deas_Voice · #5 06-27-2008, 04:52 PM

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Originally Posted by Minomato

What's with the lines on the body of it? They look scrapes/scratches. Was that meant to be part of the gun's detail?

1)what you mean lines on the body? how the player is holding it?

2)yeah i think so..
is that bad

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doyouskate · #6 06-27-2008, 04:57 PM

I think it looks like a bad version of the FAMAS.

Deas_Voice · #7 06-27-2008, 04:58 PM

maybe i should change the handle to the other way? -_-

xXPoodlesXx · #8 06-27-2008, 05:21 PM

if it is a rifle should it not have a front grip? something..who holds a rifle one handed? ykno? not trying to burn u.

Deas_Voice · #9 06-27-2008, 05:24 PM

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Originally Posted by xXPoodlesXx

if it is a rifle should it not have a front grip? something..who holds a rifle one handed? ykno? not trying to burn u.

alrgt I'll add that

Deas_Voice · #10 06-27-2008, 05:27 PM

okey i changed the handle direction and added something to hold on.

hows that?

pooper200000 · #11 06-27-2008, 06:38 PM

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Originally Posted by Deas_Voice

okey i changed the handle direction and added something to hold on.

hows that?

It seems pretty small and doesn't seem to blend with a lot of the colors you would see in game. Can you try other views and showing it on a player?

Deas_Voice · #12 06-27-2008, 08:31 PM

okey heres the player hold;

and the multi views (with i would be happy if i could have some help on down/up view, i'm not so good on that);

pooper200000 · #13 06-27-2008, 08:37 PM

You could always try to make it get longer and wider in the back? That might help.

Deas_Voice · #14 06-27-2008, 09:07 PM

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Originally Posted by pooper200000

You could always try to make it get longer and wider in the back? That might help.

hmm..
i dont see how you are thinking i would make it wider..

pooper200000 · #15 06-27-2008, 09:30 PM

You can make it wider by having it get larger and smaller. That might add contrast.