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Old 04-09-2005, 09:06 PM
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Welcome to another Rate My Level thread
today in this thread I will be posting a level i made today..
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I dont see many tile errors but some tiles were overused like your flowers for instence along with a few other objects. But other then that its pretty decent
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Old 04-09-2005, 10:36 PM
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I dont see many tile errors but some tiles were overused like your flowers for instence along with a few other objects. But other then that its pretty decent

Look at the diagonal slats on the cliffs "\" that way. You should see some errors. Along with errors at the top near the dirt and grass parts.
Grass is kind of bland, but I don't like over detailed levels, just kind of under-detailed.
Yeah, you overused a few objects and the style is done way to much. Outside cliffwork, that is. That lowered my rate on you because its just not unique or original.

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Old 04-09-2005, 10:38 PM
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I dont see many tile errors but some tiles were overused like your flowers for instence along with a few other objects. But other then that its pretty decent
...you must be blind

Your cliffs contain many tile errors, the second cliff that has the door is tile errored, sand paths are too "solod", detail is too scarce, decent job with the trees .

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Old 04-09-2005, 10:43 PM
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Your cliffs contain many tile errors, the second cliff that has the door is tile errored, sand paths are too "solod", detail is too scarce, decent job with the trees .

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Oh damn lol I didn't even notice the door. I only noticed the tile he used on the diagonal parts. And yeah I agree the detail is scarce lol.
I noticed on the top of the cliff near the dirt, its too choppy there, hes missing the tiles up there that make it fit.
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Old 04-09-2005, 10:50 PM
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No i dont see any although i cant open the picture becuse firefox is being *** so i saw the thumb nail...
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Old 04-09-2005, 11:43 PM
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The edits didn't change my mind. On the errors you fixed on the cliffing you still missed some and you added those shrubs. It's apparently hard to make the shrubs look good but you failed
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Old 04-09-2005, 11:53 PM
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Old 04-09-2005, 11:56 PM
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Not a fan of tough love eh?

Either way it's better they tell you what's wrong with it, that way you can fix it next time.
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Old 04-10-2005, 06:47 AM
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a word of advice undo what you did the red stuff with the fire looks kinda creepy.
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Old 04-10-2005, 01:21 PM
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Old 04-10-2005, 01:59 PM
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You are very good at tiling and what not, but there is something about levels with a lot of tiling that just have the same taste to them. Using a lot of tiling can be good, but people don't take advantage of them. They figure if you have cliffs, trees and grass tiling everywhere it makes a level superb. There just isnt anything unique about the level, it's just another trees, cliffs and grass tiling level.
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