My House...

[jacob_bald6225]

Well I am out of ideas of stuff to put on the right side, and I wanted to see if im going good on it... the level has lots of images so im just going to put it as a zip file... the password to the secret room (Up on the platform) is "password" without the "s.

All in all I like it. Do you?

Edit: Be sure to extract it.

[Mykel]

I am wayyyy to lazy...
You can upload multiple screenshots at once now, you know....

[Xecutor]

You were headed in the right direction...

[jacob_bald6225]

Originally Posted by Xecutor

You were headed in the right direction...

Are you sure you extracted it to a folder? Here is how it looks on my end! 3 seperate pics

[Xecutor]

Well that's nice and all but not all that cool. I was talking about the level design.

[Silver Knight]

Parts I Like:
-The paths, they aren't just straight paths, which adds a bit of needed interest to the level.

Parts that need improvement:
-The overall design of the level is dull. Things don't flow like they should.
Perhaps seperate some aspects of the room into different rooms. (Like the bed or the statue thing.)
-The choice of tiles don't flow. In one spot you have plain ground tiles, yet in the next you have more regal tiles. In addition, your tiles could be changed to provide more eye-candy for the player.
-The signs. Maybe this is just a personal annoyance of mine, but I can't stand signs at every door/entrance to direct users that for some reason can't figure out what a house is for.

Overall: 5/10
Try to change up the tiles you used, maybe change the design of the house.
Overall, not too shabby if you are a beginner.

[haunter]

I really like that hidden room and roof dealie, that's cool!

[Nitkizi]

Originally Posted by haunter

I really like that hidden room and roof dealie, that's cool!

I concur..