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syltburk · #1 12-14-2003, 10:50 PM

Hi I made a level today and I would like rating and oppinions in eventual improvements

Thanks

haunter · #2 12-14-2003, 10:55 PM

It's very... Green... And... Plain... What's with the big green blotch on the right? Add more bushes, trees, perhaps a pond... And the grass-to-grass tiles look weird when they just end like that.

Ducati_Link · #3 12-14-2003, 11:00 PM

Its very nice.. a couple of tile errors and I still dont like the housing. Looks too odd with black holes.

Cliffing and detailing is nice though

syltburk · #4 12-14-2003, 11:11 PM

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Originally posted by haunter
It's very... Green... And... Plain... What's with the big green blotch on the right? Add more bushes, trees, perhaps a pond... And the grass-to-grass tiles look weird when they just end like that.

Im not sure what you mean with blotch and also how am i supposed to do with the grass tiles then if i cant end them?

Also i added some trees and bushes

haunter · #5 12-14-2003, 11:22 PM

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Originally posted by syltburk

Im not sure what you mean with blotch and also how am i supposed to do with the grass tiles then if i cant end them?

Also i added some trees and bushes

Blotch means like, an area, a large green spot...

And you can use custom graphics to end the grass thing, or connect the other end to something solid...

I still see alot of tile errors, and the detail is still pretty plain, all weed-grass pretty much...

syltburk · #6 12-15-2003, 07:21 PM

how about this tehn

note: Thanks for help on house Wan

Spark910 · #7 12-15-2003, 07:40 PM

The bottom one is just the same level as the one beofre but an extra cave entrance and some of those like steeping stones outside a door.

The house is great, but doesn't suit the level.

syltburk · #8 12-15-2003, 07:41 PM

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Originally posted by Spark910
The bottom one is just the same level as the one beofre but an extra cave entrance and some of those like steeping stones outside a door.

The house is great, but doesn't suit the level.

Yeah and swamp and different tree style :O

syltburk · #9 12-15-2003, 07:52 PM

(Sorry for double posting)

Heres another update, using more different tiles this time

zell12 · #10 12-15-2003, 08:03 PM

I think you did a nice job on it, I don't like the two different styles of paths merged, but that is just me. Anyway, where the upper-grass ends, it just... ends, mabey you should do something with it. Other then that, all I see is one little error, mabey it isn't, with the cliff. It is dark, then on the diagional, it goes a lighter version of it. I think there is another set of tiles for that, not sure.

But all-in-all, it is a good level.

SlikRick · #11 12-15-2003, 08:05 PM

The level looks good but the house doesnt fit the theme of the level(like spark said) and add some detailing to the blank green spaces. I also see a few tile errors that would be eas to fix.

Judge_S · #12 12-16-2003, 03:18 AM

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Originally posted by syltburk
how am i supposed to do with the grass tiles then if i cant end them?

Well, they don't need to be cascaded all the time.

Ducati_Link · #13 12-19-2003, 05:48 AM

I like the level better now. I dont mind level with a it less detail. Depending what its use for. Yet yeah.. house dosnt fit in.

Good work though

deman1171 · #14 12-19-2003, 06:37 AM

Woah, i really like it.
It's not the same thing over and over, it's really good.

Androk · #15 12-19-2003, 06:56 AM

Cliffs are horrid...
House is mostly good.
Path is awsome.
Everything else is meh.