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Old 09-21-2003, 06:06 AM
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It had been a couple of months since I made a level and posted one here.
The attachment is a level I made about a week ago.
Please rate and tell me your likes and dislikes.

This was the last level I posted on here few months ago.
http://forums.graal2001.com/forums/s...threadid=44256


Here's a couple of older levels I had posted on here.
http://forums.graal2001.com/forums/s...ght=Criminal+X
http://forums.graal2001.com/forums/s...ght=Criminal+X
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Old 09-21-2003, 08:20 AM
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Not bad, 7/10.

Lol, two of those old threads had to be moved to the levels forums by Psyker. ;o
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Old 09-22-2003, 12:52 AM
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hmm
well i don't really like the water much maybe you should try making the shallow watter closer to the shore and add some more deep water then some really deep water o.o
i also don't really like the path that much.

but the cliffs are really nice you did a good job there....and the detailing is not bad either

i'd say 5-6/10
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Old 09-22-2003, 01:26 AM
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Old 09-22-2003, 04:55 PM
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Your water in some areas is really empty and could use some detailing. The cliffs are really nice and is what makes your level look good over all. The water to grass is used to much I recommend maybe trying to switch it to a beach in some areas or something. It would definatly add to the overall quality. Grass looks a little cluttered but not so that it looks terrible but taking out one or two here and there wouldnt be a bad idea. All in all I would say about 6/10
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Old 09-22-2003, 11:53 PM
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hmm
well i don't really like the water much maybe you should try making the shallow watter closer to the shore and add some more deep water then some really deep water o.o
i also don't really like the path that much.

but the cliffs are really nice you did a good job there....and the detailing is not bad either

i'd say 5-6/10

Agreed.
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Old 09-23-2003, 12:38 AM
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hmm
well i don't really like the water much maybe you should try making the shallow watter closer to the shore and add some more deep water then some really deep water o.o
i also don't really like the path that much.

but the cliffs are really nice you did a good job there....and the detailing is not bad either

i'd say 5-6/10
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Old 09-23-2003, 12:43 AM
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Old 09-23-2003, 12:48 AM
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Oh really..? XD **** Rex. How can I be an idiot if you agree with what he is saying too :o
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Old 09-23-2003, 12:49 AM
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Old 09-23-2003, 01:04 AM
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go out to the woods or to just any river...tell me how much sand you see the grass to water isnt really over used

edit: oops i overlooked the last one...the one that he attatched with the first post - yeah i guess beach tiles could be used there
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Old 09-24-2003, 04:49 PM
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very nice
9/10
i cannot build much better
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