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Old 11-12-2002, 02:38 AM
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Rate my level

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1/10

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Old 11-12-2002, 03:22 AM
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Pretty nice. I give it 4.5/10.

I think your grass detail should be clumped, and try using a bigger variety of path tiles. I also think you have too many mushrooms,bushes, and the grass on grass tiles do not look good. Try using a varitey of grass detailing tiles as well.

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Old 11-12-2002, 04:26 AM
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2.5/10

Everything is too linear... Too many mushrooms and the rest of the ground detail is too 'blah'... Hmm... The water puddles, and paths are horrible. I don't like them at all.
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Old 11-12-2002, 04:30 AM
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6/10 not bad, but u have dont better...
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Old 11-12-2002, 05:25 AM
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Looks alright.

It is too linear, as Shadowless mentioned. You seem to use the four corner-grass clump a lot.

The mushrooms look sortof nice, but will really annoy the player when he is running about it. I wish mushrooms were choppable. ;o

Anyways, I think it is around 6 and 7 out of 10.

You could easily make great levels, if you made stuff look more natural, and varied tiles more.
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Old 11-12-2002, 05:30 AM
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Err.. Something about that level that's just..odd..
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Old 11-12-2002, 06:43 AM
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Hmm, i have to agree with supermanjr, it jsut donest look well to the eye
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Old 11-12-2002, 03:23 PM
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yea i noticed to much mushrooms



well i will try to improve i post my update when i come home from school...
and what do you mean mykel


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Old 11-14-2002, 09:26 PM
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i dont anderstand what u mean by "natural" can u show me a exampel?

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Old 11-15-2002, 02:43 AM
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ummmm ya a bit to linear as everyone was saying...id say about a 6/10. The house is neat, but what i think they mean by more natural is to change that linearness. Make the movement of water and placement of grass more linear, and make weed and other grass abnormality tiles in clumps, kind of like they appear in nature.
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Old 11-15-2002, 11:02 PM
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I like the level, i think some of the grass tiling could use some work, as well as taking those candles off the trees
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Old 11-16-2002, 01:29 AM
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Har har.. 4/10.. Looks like a Babylon style level >.
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Old 11-16-2002, 01:37 AM
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Um.. Not really. What is that supposed to mean any way? Babylon levels are pretty good. They're not like Delterias , UN's, or any other server like that. They're one of the last servers with a mild detail rate.
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