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Old 08-04-2002, 04:37 AM
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!Rate Meh Level

Rate me 1-10 and tell me what i did wrong and how to improove it.
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Old 08-04-2002, 04:43 AM
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Your level - 3/10
Too many tile errors. Need more detail in grass. Too many tile errors.
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Old 08-04-2002, 04:51 AM
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Use the tree tiles, those treetop NPCs arn't needed.
The path just seems to stop, at least connect the 2 ends up.
Fix the cliffs, there are tiles that go at the top of them to fit in with what you have done with the diagonal cliffs.
Lots of small tile errors around the lake that need to be fixed.
Waterfall starts way to high up and untill it hits the cliff it looks really bad using the bottom of it for the top.
Grass needs more detail.
House could use a little work too so it doesn't look so plain.
Water detailing is okay though.
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Old 08-05-2002, 07:55 AM
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Well i likee the level but the house is very plain......u shouldnt use the predifined house tiles.......I'll show u my houses. by the way if u like me tell me plz
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Old 08-05-2002, 03:33 PM
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Old 08-05-2002, 11:18 PM
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I still dont understand how people make these levels, then think they look good... *no offence Mr. Matrrualcupix*
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Old 08-24-2002, 04:00 PM
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uhm it looks empty make more tile grasses
and it has to many tile erors
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Old 08-24-2002, 06:12 PM
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1/10.


Generally, halfgrass is a terrible tile to use as detailing. Most people don't like it.

Waterfalls start at the edge of cliffs, not in the middle of the pond.

Path abruptly ends without appropriate tiles.

House is predefined.

Not enough detail, in general.



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Old 08-24-2002, 06:33 PM
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That level makes me want to cry... 2/10
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Old 08-24-2002, 10:04 PM
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wow u guys are harsh....2.5/10, ok im harsh too. Um, detail, detail...and detail, fix tile errors, and whats with waterfalls, bequeibes???
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Old 08-28-2002, 06:52 PM
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it's ok.
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