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Old 08-19-2002, 06:30 AM
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Ummm, this is sorta a rate thread. Tell me whatcha think of this castle and what I can do to improve it...you may rate it if you like.
(The castle, walls, and whats in between them are all thats made, it's going to be put in a city, so the outside isn't done yet.)
Thank You in advance!
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Old 08-19-2002, 07:10 AM
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lets see ill edit this when i think of it
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Old 08-19-2002, 07:38 AM
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Too plane guy, strait edges with that style aren't good.
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Old 08-19-2002, 08:37 AM
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Re: Help Me Out

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Ummm, this is sorta a rate thread. Tell me whatcha think of this castle and what I can do to improve it...you may rate it if you like.
(The castle, walls, and whats in between them are all thats made, it's going to be put in a city, so the outside isn't done yet.)
Thank You in advance!
Not bad
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Old 08-19-2002, 10:49 AM
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Too plane guy, strait edges with that style aren't good.
you mean on the castle itself? hmmm...perhaps ill try spicin it up a bit more...
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Old 08-19-2002, 10:51 AM
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the tiles u used for the castle arnt very apealing... to me atleast
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Old 08-19-2002, 12:10 PM
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Corupt: the doorway is cool but dont mix stone and wood I dunno it just don't look to good make an image out of the doorway and make it look like stone it would be cool as for the rest of the castle add pillars comming off the walls so it doesnt look so flat.. maybe some torches? tile errors on the very top with the water and the top looks flate becuase of a error in your building depth perception. for the outside wall its cool but try to make it out of soemthing else maybe i mean it looks good but try to experiment with something else
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Old 08-19-2002, 07:41 PM
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xXShakakuXx: To me it looks like something is missing. Try to spruce it up a bit!
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Old 08-19-2002, 09:03 PM
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Old 08-19-2002, 11:15 PM
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only thing i dont like is the floor, grass should stay outside X.x
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Old 08-19-2002, 11:20 PM
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The grass looks good but you should replace it with somekind of stone because a castle courtyard is mostly made out of stone if not only, right ?
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Old 08-20-2002, 12:56 AM
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oh, in reply to savant, that is the outside, its a courtyard (the outside of the walls will be a village/city of some sort) hmmm...maybe i will make some sort of courtyard...push the walls out more...then edge tile outside the wall...hmmmm, ill do that now, expect an updated screenie soon, thanks for the suggestions
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Old 08-20-2002, 01:19 AM
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ok updated it a bit, tell me whatcha think.
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Old 08-20-2002, 01:40 AM
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I still think you should replace the grass with stone and make pillars from the 2nd story wall to the 2nd story floor and the same on the 1st making it look more 3d
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Old 08-20-2002, 07:42 AM
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but...to do that i would hafta extend the second floor over the edge of the first floor...that would kinda completely change the general shape...hm...ill try it and see what it looks like.
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