Rate - Begin of Castle

[Masah]

Napier:
Hey Yall, this isn't Masah it's Napier... Hes letting me use his name for the forums you might remember me (Napier_GMX) anyway, This is the beginning of my castle. At the top starts the natural part. Its supposed to be symmetrical cuz its like a HQ castle kinda.

The next level up will have the main chambers... its gonna be quite big its for a little plot type thing I made!

I wrote it for Tritan (I am Admin on Tritan) but we aleady had a plot so I guess ill change Tritan to some other name and become one of the many pw's that will never get up lol!
Kingdom Decendants: (Main Class)

The lands of Tritan have been mutilated forever, with the fall of the great kingdom of Ruinport Tritan has lost all policy and law. Crime has risen to an all time high and the people are in a state of utter chaos.

Only a select few can chose to help regain control of the once great lands of Tritan. When Ruinport kingdom fell, the great crown of ruinport which held the rope which binds the people of tritan was lost.

Only the Kingdom Decendants can find this rope. Although it may take countless hours and quests to even get a lead of the where abouts of the now rotting T-Rope.

Only when the T-Rope and the Crown are united once again will Tritan see peace and government again.

Only then can Tritan be civilized and can women and children walk the streets with out the great great fear of being killed.


Bounty Hunter: (Class)

For all of eternity the great country of Tritan has had the illegal activities of the Bounty Hunters. It wasn't until the death of the great Ruinport kingdom that Bounty Hunting became one of the largest proffesions in all of Tritan.

Many people give up their life savings just to get revenge on those who have taken their beloved friends and family. The Bounty Hunter has always done much more than this, however. When people wanted some one dead they would simply call a Bounty Hunter. A Bounty Hunter's task can be very dangerous and has forever been for the brave and reckless people of Tritan.

Prices have always varied for a Bounty Hunters work always depending on how many challenges he and his group has overcome. But no matter what has always happened a Bounty Hunter never betrayed his hirer. For when this happens the Bounty Hunter will truly become the slime of Tritan.


Merchant: (Class)

One great time Tritan had Marketplaces that spanned across whole cities. It wasn't until the crash of the great Ruinport that Tritan lost its capabailities of marketplace. But many people still seeked to buy and sell their goods so that our warriors and citizens could once again not be scavengers like in the ancient days.

The merchant clan has always gone to any price to sell their good and quest for treasure. Although many merchants are very weak they find it easy to hire their help. Ancient Tritan was so rich with treasure and riches. Not many know the history of what happened but now, all the greatest treasures are hidden forever.

The great ruins of Ancient Tritan can be found all over and in unsuspecting places but when a great Merchant finds these ruins he can find items that people will buy for great ammounts of coins. It is said that there is a treasure found in Tritan that gives his Merchant the ability to find treasure simply by walking around but no one has been able to prove this true.


Companion: (Class)

The companions have always been followers for the hire. Most popular with the weak Merchants they would help them with their tasks for a fee which may sometimes be great. The Companions are strong and clever and suceed with ease.

Companions rely on their brute strength to make their way through their tasks given to them by their hirers.


The Citizen: (Class)

The heart of Tritan. The Citizen are usually quite poor and have little to do but have always done what they want how they want it.

Being the largest group of people on the lands of Tritan the citizens were once instilled with glory and riches.

With the fall of ruinport the citizens lost all hope and humanity. They embraced crime and death and it became a part of their lifes. Most citizens hope and dream that one day the great Kingdom Decendants will find the Crown and the T-Rope and once again unite them.


I dunno just playin around its like 10 levels big once I am done so......

[Masah]

Napier: Errrrr wrong one

[Poogle]

6/10

[Masah]

Napier: Thanks for your input!

[Spark910]

-More detail in grass
-By doors you have them like pillars, use tiles on right of the tileset to make it look like a long pillar instead of 3, it may look better

Overall:5/10 (Nothing in it much, but make a meaning to it and you can have an 8.5/10)

[cloudstrifevii]

First one would be better for a castle second is what I call a certain I don't know what.

[Faheria_LAT3]

mmmmkay: Input: Doesn't float my boat. Can't criticize peoples castle making skills too much, it's either you've got it or you don't. And for the ground tiling, too straight!

[MrGannondorf]

I realy like the first one! add some finer looking details and you'll get a good rate from me's. 6/10 for now.

[Birdbird_0]

EWW

[Thak2]

It'd look better if you didn't use that purple floor, and you replaced the wooden door ways with the inside castle doorways.

[Tohz]

Napier:
Mmmkay Im fixing it up a bit and making it bigger Hold on it be cooler this time

[Tohz]

Napier:
Err Ok This is a smaller update I dont know why I keep updating but hey Its going to be huge... you see the castle will have walls around then a huge city inside the walls... it will be around 100 outside levels etc Im doing it for fun and I do not claim to be a super good level artist. Just having some fun with my spare time

[AlexH]

Well it's better than the first one.
The castle pillars are a little better place.
I really do hate the carpet.

[stefan76]

Originally posted by Birdbird_0
EWW

times 500!
And thats all I have to say. I'm speechless for once.
Delete the level. That should help it some....