It's too choppy. The roof, namely, many of the border tiles don't line up at all, making it rather ugly. The roof tiles themselves also just don't look good

A good attempt at originality, but they just look too squared off and broken up. Also, the "Bank" logo... ew :x Tiling words NEVER looks good.
The green lights... way too overboard. Either make them much dimmer or get rid of them completely, makes the place look haunted. There IS more than one "side" tile for the brick wall, too. Look closely at the walls and you'll see they don't line up either.
On the plus side, it is a good attempt at completely tiling a building from scratch, and the roman pillars are used decently, bit it's just an eyesore overall.
3/10