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Old 11-15-2001, 08:21 AM
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Ok I would like some feedback on a level I made for fun. If you are going to criticize it please tell me what I could do to improve it. I only spent about 20 minutes on it and I know myself that I could improve upon it. Thank you.
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Old 11-15-2001, 08:24 AM
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Re: Opinions on my level!
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Ok I would like some feedback on a level I made for fun. If you are going to criticize it please tell me what I could do to improve it. I only spent about 20 minutes on it and I know myself that I could improve upon it. Thank you.
the house is ugly
the guy with no head is ugly
its kind of bland as well
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Old 11-15-2001, 08:27 AM
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Bad swamp tiling.
H8 4 New Tree Tiles(not your fault on that part).
The house tiles, in the front, sorta don't look right. The pillar tiles you used, don't fit when overlapped like that, just make one pillar for one collum.
Dirt thingies are nice, accept I prefer that you don't use two different types of trail tiles for them.
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Old 11-15-2001, 08:28 AM
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Brad - The guy has no head because I loaded it from my older graal that doesn't have the webgifs...I was in a hurry. And you said exactly what I DIDN'T ask for...WHY IS IT BLAND? Also, WHY IS THE HOUSE UGLY? People on the forums don't seem to read posts before they respond.
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Old 11-15-2001, 08:51 AM
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Brad - The guy has no head because I loaded it from my older graal that doesn't have the webgifs...I was in a hurry. And you said exactly what I DIDN'T ask for...WHY IS IT BLAND? Also, WHY IS THE HOUSE UGLY? People on the forums don't seem to read posts before they respond.
you wanted criticism you got it partner
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Old 11-15-2001, 11:34 AM
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It ok just give that d00d his head back and why is there that thing from a fence just there no connected to n e thing else?
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Old 11-15-2001, 10:40 PM
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I think the house looks good, though it does look a little out of place in the level.
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Old 11-15-2001, 10:59 PM
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The Level looks empty and the house doesn't look good and out of place...
add more details...
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Old 11-16-2001, 12:32 AM
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Plain.
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Old 11-16-2001, 10:38 AM
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Ok about 4 people now have said it is plain...but tell me what to do to NOT make it plain..like what should I add?
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Old 11-16-2001, 10:45 AM
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maybe another house some more trees some NPCS you know the usual
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Old 11-16-2001, 11:12 AM
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Ok about 4 people now have said it is plain...but tell me what to do to NOT make it plain..like what should I add?
i think it looks kinda plain ....
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Old 11-16-2001, 11:15 AM
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Ok about 4 people now have said it is plain...but tell me what to do to NOT make it plain..like what should I add?
look in the tileset and find different tiles, there are lots.
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Old 11-16-2001, 11:18 AM
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Thumbs down
ugly

wtf is that?


i think is a bad level

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Old 11-16-2001, 11:25 AM
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ugly

wtf is that?


i think is a bad level

do you have to do that every single post!!!
it is so god damn anoying
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