my level..

NefariousPK · #1 08-04-2005, 07:38 AM

here's a level im making for a quest,can you tell me and spot out the tile errors if there is any? and any improvements i should make.
It's obviously not finished...

WanDaMan · #2 08-04-2005, 11:57 AM

I love the layout of the level, it's very nice. Reminds me of what I did for an enterance to an island. I'll post it later on in the day

A lot of errors on the cliffs. Apart from that I like

xAndrewx · #3 08-04-2005, 12:30 PM

Ew, I don't like the waste of space.

maximus_asinus · #4 08-04-2005, 07:02 PM

People have asked me for help doing cliffing and such so I am slowing putting tutorial together based on there mistakes. Here is some tips.

haunter · #5 08-04-2005, 07:05 PM

Why does the bottom right-most waterfall go out so much further than the one next to it? They both start from the same Y position and they appear to start at the same height...

Also, the cliffs on either side of those bottom waterfalls are skewed, they don't align... If you tried to put cliffs there instead of waterfalls, they wouldn't match up. You should always make you cliffs match up even if they're behind a waterfall and only imaginary.

WanDaMan · #6 08-04-2005, 07:20 PM

Here's a level I made, I made it too show you that the level you posted had errors in the cliffs. I hope it helps you understand how they're done.

Well, this is how I do my cliffs, if anyone else has another way show an example

NefariousPK · #7 08-04-2005, 08:20 PM

Well I looked at wan's level and i tried to make mine look a little better,i also took those tiles which max showed and put them on the cliff's i think it fixed them?
and i also fixed the waterfalls

Infernix · #8 08-05-2005, 02:06 AM

O_O if you ever need help man you should just like....Look at a level you see on npulse. Most levels there are done right. I think people see like this tiled error cliffs on delteria or somthing and think they are correct.

o and dont use the two outlines for dirt yet...ya know the dark and light ones.....you need to start out slow. Paths and stuff take awile to perfect when you start out because you dont really understand the idea of..idk like not making it have a lot of straight edges and a square look to it.

o btw you still have errors in the cliffs O_o.

Spark910 · #9 08-05-2005, 04:03 AM

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Originally Posted by Infernix

o btw you still have errors in the cliffs O_o.

The tiles with grass on them by the water, for example.

Mafukie · #10 08-06-2005, 10:28 AM

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Originally Posted by NefariousPK

Well I looked at wan's level and i tried to make mine look a little better,i also took those tiles which max showed and put them on the cliff's i think it fixed them?
and i also fixed the waterfalls

I like WanDaMan's level a lot! and your level is getting there, big improvement from your last version.