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Old 01-13-2007, 07:31 PM
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2x trees

Well, im working for trees that will be used on Mythic in an area named "Dead Forest", and heres what Ive come up with so far. Comments?




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Old 01-13-2007, 07:48 PM
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A simple fix would be to shorten the trunk.
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Old 01-13-2007, 09:46 PM
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I dunno why I'm not a graphics guy but that dead trunk is awful. It just looks disproportionate and odd.
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Old 01-13-2007, 10:02 PM
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It just looks disproportionate and odd.
it does, indeed, look quite odd.
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Old 01-13-2007, 10:08 PM
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It looks quite good on the terrain tileset im working on.

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Old 01-13-2007, 10:40 PM
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Nice trees, it fit with that grass :O
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Old 01-13-2007, 10:58 PM
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It looks quite good on the terrain tileset im working on.

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Yea, not bad - but I'd still only shorten the trunk.
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Old 01-13-2007, 11:31 PM
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Not only this but the roots should go from being thick to thin, not thin to thin...just weird.
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Old 01-14-2007, 04:02 AM
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I think the tree is heavy on the left side. Maybe add something on the right for visual balance ? Possibly a limb on the lower right.
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Old 01-14-2007, 04:07 AM
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Shorten it, and you've got a winner in my books.
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Old 01-14-2007, 07:00 AM
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I think the tree is heavy on the left side. Maybe add something on the right for visual balance ? Possibly a limb on the lower right.
I believe they're called weeping willows - they usually lean to one side.
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Old 01-14-2007, 07:45 AM
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Looks odd and unbalanced to me.
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Old 01-16-2007, 04:29 AM
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Yeah, like everybody else has said, trunk needs to be shorter for it to appear to be in perspective. Nice work nonetheless.
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Old 01-16-2007, 04:34 AM
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It looks like someone needs to look at Victor's tutorial on making trees...
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