Classic Pet Shop

[Kino]

What do you think of this classic pet shop

[NeoJenova]

I guess I could say nice layout, but the tiles you used clash way to much for me. It would not be a place I would want to visit often as a player.

Layout - 5/10

Design - 2/10

Overall - 3/10

[draygin]

I think its a classic for sure, a classic example of crap. Man that level is so bad I dont know that I even know where to begin. The green light and tree images are just wierd I recommend taking that out. The walls look bad (at least I Think so but some people might like it) Floor looks bad definatly recommend not going with that design. The sand and water and grass is just wierd and has no logic to your indoor design. (then again nothing looks really logical) Yellow carpet is wierd. Why are the tables overlapping like that? You think some one would known to give them a little bit of space when they where moving funiture.

I know this is really harsh but the level just isnt salvagable. Not unless you break it down to just the outline and completely retile it.

In short the level is Chaos.

0/10 (like my first real 0 for a finished level)

Now I'm not saying you're necessarily a bad level maker. Just that this level particular level is really bad. I recommend going back to the drawing board . As a word of advice levels are generally better if they have a sense of logic and order like its supposed to be there. Everything you have no makes no sense of why its like that it looks more like random stuff running rampent.

[EmortalDragon]

i give you a 3/10 sorry ;'(

Most Level Makers make thier tiles blend so it fits well your dirt tiles go's into rugs -_- doesnt look that good.Touch it a bit more.and repost it to get a better score .

0/10 (like my first real 0 for a finished level)

To be honest i dont think he deserves a zero.He is posting to see are opinions and what he can change.Just give him a littkle more cofidence and im sure that level will have potential.

[draygin]

Originally posted by EmortalDragon
i give you a 3/10 sorry ;'(

Most Level Makers make thier tiles blend so it fits well your dirt tiles go's into rugs -_- doesnt look that good.Touch it a bit more.and repost it to get a better score .



To be honest i dont think he deserves a zero.He is posting to see are opinions and what he can change.Just give him a littkle more cofidence and im sure that level will have potential.

Only potential is the lay out. He needs to completely retile it. If something has to be completely retiled its a 0. I was a bit of an ass in my post my bad on that one. It's good in the aspect that its not all predefined and square. He just needs to get things that dont clash so badly.

[Eric_1337]

I like it.. the floor tiling could be better.


5/10.

[Nick1988]

Well it looks like you were going for a more different style, but I really don't like it. 2.5/10 (for effort and such)

[Blitz_Hunter]

Well, its definately something different..lol The layout isnt to bad..but could be much better..The trees just really make no sense on why they are there , so I would get rid of them. The barrels are put together wrong as tile errors, and your floor tiling is not to great looking..The level could use alot of improvement but it could be a good level if you fix some things up..

5/10 on layout

2/10 on tiling

overall 3.5/10

[LegendaryAzreil]

Originally posted by draygin
I think its a classic for sure, a classic example of crap. Man that level is so bad I dont know that I even know where to begin. The green light and tree images are just wierd I recommend taking that out. The walls look bad (at least I Think so but some people might like it) Floor looks bad definatly recommend not going with that design. The sand and water and grass is just wierd and has no logic to your indoor design. (then again nothing looks really logical) Yellow carpet is wierd. Why are the tables overlapping like that? You think some one would known to give them a little bit of space when they where moving funiture.

I know this is really harsh but the level just isnt salvagable. Not unless you break it down to just the outline and completely retile it.

In short the level is Chaos.

0/10 (like my first real 0 for a finished level)

Now I'm not saying you're necessarily a bad level maker. Just that this level particular level is really bad. I recommend going back to the drawing board . As a word of advice levels are generally better if they have a sense of logic and order like its supposed to be there. Everything you have no makes no sense of why its like that it looks more like random stuff running rampent.

agreed.

[DarkShadows_Legend]

O.o weird
x.X Lots and lots of tile errors.

It could be better. It is a somewhat nice level.

[hidro]

Its... Uh... Original?
I really think it looks bad
Sorry

3/10

[deman1171]

What server is this on?

[Aknts]

5/10 Good general idea and layout but you followed through terribly. Just because I like a couple things you get a 5.

[EsCanavi]

o.o''
2/10
those path don't realy look good in an inside...+ the sand too well I personaly dont realy like this level at all
gonna post some level i made here.
just go to the following link there some level (outside i made for npulse a while ago and meh house on EoA well it kinda sux >.<

http://membres.lycos.fr/escanavidk/npulse/


:o and yeah sorry if i talk weird im french so -.-'

[dorfindel]

Originally posted by Kino
What do you think of this classic pet shop

I think its ick. Nice try though. Main things: Floor is HORRIBLE and wtf is that water stuff doing there? X_X