Level.

[kabouter]

Well, its my first levels since a few months. Ofcourse, as you can see it is NOT done yet, so don't talk to me about "the water is undeep, make is deep". Because let me tell you a secret, I will

Just wanted to show the idea of the level. I'll post it again when its done

[Luciano]

Originally Posted by kabouter

Well, its my first levels since a few months. Ofcourse, as you can see it is NOT done yet, so don't talk to me about "the water is undeep, make is deep". Because let me tell you a secret, I will

Just wanted to show the idea of the level. I'll post it again when its done

Looks awesome-o so far.

[Pooka]

It's a nice level, but there are a few things I don't like about it and think you could fix

First, fix the cliff tiling. Especially the joins where the cliff turns to run down the screen, if you look you can find the proper tiles for that area.

I don't much like the way the water comes above the cliff either, it looks like the water's running uphill and water doesn't really do that.

Otherwise, it's nice and simple. Straight to the point and nothing flashy. Just how I like it


Oh and I got your PM, I'm thinking things over and I'll get back to you when I've had some time to think it over. Things are kind of busy for me at the moment.

[kabouter]

Originally Posted by Luciano

Looks awesome-o so far.

Thx..!

Originally Posted by Pooka

It's a nice level, but there are a few things I don't like about it and think you could fix

First, fix the cliff tiling. Especially the joins where the cliff turns to run down the screen, if you look you can find the proper tiles for that area.

I don't much like the way the water comes above the cliff either, it looks like the water's running uphill and water doesn't really do that.

Otherwise, it's nice and simple. Straight to the point and nothing flashy. Just how I like it


Oh and I got your PM, I'm thinking things over and I'll get back to you when I've had some time to think it over. Things are kind of busy for me at the moment.

Yeah, the water will be fixed I quess, looks a bit weird =P

Ok, i'll see what I can do about the cliffing, cliffing in not really my cup of thee.

[WanDaMan]

Looks nice wouter! D:

If you need help with the cliffs I can help you

[zell12]

It needs alot of work, but it looks okay so far. But uh, try posting finished levels.

[kabouter]

Originally Posted by zell12

It needs alot of work, but it looks okay so far. But uh, try posting finished levels.

That's like a really helpfull post you've got there . Give me some tips mayby?

edit: Added the updated version, still not done yet.
As you can see, I editted the cliffs. Please give me some commants about that, and ofcrouse the water is changed.

[Inspiration]

overall good, just picked these out for you to fix up

[Crono]

Looks a HELL lot like Wan's style. Is he teaching you or something? Looks ok so far, I wanna see it detailed

5/10

[kabouter]

Originally Posted by Gerami

Looks a HELL lot like Wan's style. Is he teaching you or something? Looks ok so far, I wanna see it detailed

5/10

Ya, he used to teach me things here and there. Here is an updated version. Please give me some commants of the cliffing

[Crono]

Deep water looks good, cliffs are ok but nothing special.

[haunter]

Your ability to join cliffs at the corners, or lack there of, makes baby jesus cry.

(read: The parts that Inspiration circled on the cliffs still arent fixed)

[Crono]

It's not only joining but right under where the grass goes there are dots. There are tiles to fix that. Try to fix it and if you need help just ask. That's what we're here for.

[kabouter]

"Help...!"
Please give me some advice on the cliff tiling since i'm not a hero in that.

[Crono]

I highly recommend going through the pre-defined ones and just cuting it apart. It helps me a lot. If you want me to post a level then ask.