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Doahh_p2p · #1 02-01-2005, 04:20 PM

Well i've kept this long enough

I'm going to post more later

Please rate 1-10

Crono · #2 02-01-2005, 05:26 PM

Variety man, variety! Dont spam swamps like that and please less bushes. You need some real detail and don't use pre-defined roads. I kinda like those houses.

Overall the level looks flat and needs some work. 3/10 :x

Hints-
Detail by hand
Make roads by hand
Make cliffs look interesting

Darlene159 · #3 02-01-2005, 06:36 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Doahh_p2p

Well i've kept this long enough

I'm going to post more later

Please rate 1-10

I agree with Gerami, way too many bushes, try using the tile that appears like a bush that has been pulled up (if you know what I mean), bush hole or whatever you want to call it.

The swamp grass looks too square, and from experiance (over using it myself), a level looks better without so much of it, try randomly placing it in some places.

Also, from experiance where roads are concerned, you can use different edges that give it an interesting look, not so perfect.

Make use of all of the different ground tiles that there are for alot of detail in the level.

Houses are kinda interesting, but you should cut off the bottom of the fence tile that is suppose to go on the ground so you dont have the green grass on the house.

I like the shape and all of the levels, nicely done, just work on the detail

5/10

Snakeandy7 · #4 02-01-2005, 07:18 PM

I don't know where to start. Sorry.

Knuckles · #5 02-01-2005, 10:46 PM

At least you got the eye for design and creativity.
Just learn how to detail, and how to work with tiles better and you'll be pro.

With swamp, theres a whole bunch of tiles you can use.
With the water, try bunching up the waves instead of randomly putting them like that.
With the bushes, try using less of them and use other tiles to fill in there spot.
With dirt, don't use predenified NPC.

Methril · #6 02-02-2005, 03:32 AM

Use the regular houses and edit them slightly in the proper ways. Don't use random tiles to make "houses".

Doahh_p2p · #7 02-02-2005, 03:52 AM

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Originally Posted by Methril

Use the regular houses and edit them slightly in the proper ways. Don't use random tiles to make "houses".

Random Tiles?

Those are MENT for houses

And by "I'll add more later" i am now

Ok it was supposed to be a swamp isle and it also looks better in Galho da Rochas tileset

I just looked at the creation date and it was 6/17/03... kinda old huh? So i'm adding a more recent one

syltburk · #8 02-02-2005, 09:27 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Knuckles

At least you got the eye for design and creativity.
Just learn how to detail, and how to work with tiles better and you'll be pro.

With swamp, theres a whole bunch of tiles you can use.
With the water, try bunching up the waves instead of randomly putting them like that.
With the bushes, try using less of them and use other tiles to fill in there spot.
With dirt, don't use predenified NPC.

I did certainly not like the design and creativity in those levels, why do you think its a good creative outline in those levels?