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Old 06-30-2004, 11:21 PM
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Cortez's level!

An old Babylonian dude, lol..
Well he hasn't level'd in a good few months, and this is his first attempt
He'd like c & c if you don't mind

Personally, I'd say 8/10 since he hasn't made a level in along time !
He also did this if anyone wants it
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Old 06-30-2004, 11:57 PM
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Old 07-01-2004, 12:24 PM
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7.5/10 is the score I give him because the TEN CHARACTER IS THERE TO GET ME!
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Old 07-01-2004, 08:21 PM
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Thanks for the reply guys.
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Old 07-02-2004, 05:58 AM
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Not bad for a first attempt in a while so I'll be a little lenient.

- The walls don't seem right, and it looks even more awkward with the doorways.
- The castle pillar I don't like being right there in front of a doorway. Those can get bothersome when walking into a level for the first time and getting trapped, or not realizing you're walking into a blocked path.
- On the bottom left and right corners they seem to be missing something. Probably would look nice with some statues or other objects up on them.

The walls are really what bug me the most though. Something about them.

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Old 07-02-2004, 06:12 AM
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Not bad for a first attempt in a while so I'll be a little lenient.

- The walls don't seem right, and it looks even more awkward with the doorways.
- The castle pillar I don't like being right there in front of a doorway. Those can get bothersome when walking into a level for the first time and getting trapped, or not realizing you're walking into a blocked path.
- On the bottom left and right corners they seem to be missing something. Probably would look nice with some statues or other objects up on them.

The walls are really what bug me the most though. Something about them.

Rate: 4/10
Jesus, a 40%? Christ.
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Old 07-02-2004, 10:19 PM
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I like it.
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Old 07-02-2004, 11:13 PM
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There's nothing wrong with it really... It's well made... It's just boring as hell..
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Old 07-02-2004, 11:33 PM
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Not bad, not bad at all. I'll give it a 7 out out of 10.
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Old 07-03-2004, 03:45 AM
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There's nothing wrong with it really... It's well made... It's just boring as hell..
I totally Agree.
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Old 07-03-2004, 03:47 AM
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I totally Agree.
Aren't you the one who made this?!
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Old 07-03-2004, 05:11 AM
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I think it looks nice....
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Old 07-03-2004, 09:51 AM
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Aren't you the one who made this?!
Yeah, but I'm not blind. I made it knowing full well it was large and lacked content. Just ignore that and look at the tiling of the floor and the walls et cetera. =P
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Old 07-03-2004, 01:19 PM
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This part doesn't look right, maybe you can move the bricky part one down?
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Old 07-04-2004, 05:22 AM
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This part doesn't look right, maybe you can move the bricky part one down?
I think it would look right if the whole room was symentrical. I messed up too far down the road, so I never corrected it. That level was just to see how my walls looked, which apparently isn't very good. I'll try again later.
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