Outside

[dorfindel]

Yeah...umm I made a new outside level yesterday...so umm here it is. The vase has been removed...because it's really dumb looking :O..and the building..well whatever I tried lol.

Rate 1-10, give reasons.

[LegendaryAzreil]

I give it a 6/10
Reasons :

1. I see alot of tile errors on the cliffs.
2. Could have used more detail than mostly parts of chopped swamp.
3. Could have curved the path lines and water lines a bit more so they weren't so straight in some places.
4. Alot of water then into a desert 15 x,y away? lol
5. The blue door bordering on the house dont look to appetizing either.

Just fix these little problems. Be around a 8 or 8.3

[ETD]

I showed all the things I would change...

Also, as Azreil said, maybe use a little more kinda of detail.. like the mushrooms
=)
8/10
good use of the cliff tiles!
*edit* oops, i just noticed the same problem on the cliffs, as i circled, exept to the left of that...
also, let me explain the castle door... the perspective is off... it's ment to look angled back, like the castle tiles... so it looks strange.

[Nick1988]

If you didn't make so many errors you would have got a good score. When you fix those also change the floor on the house, it doesn't look nice. I give it a 5/10 for now.

[dorfindel]

I really don't see any way to fix those "errors" in the cliffs..that's just how the tileset is.

And what's wrong with waves?

And umm...dude my cliffs aren't straight, that's definitely not a problem

Also, what would YOU suggest for the detail? Anything else would make it too crowded looking, plus every tile has something :O..

[dorfindel]

The only errors I could find were the ones circled. I fixed that.

And the blue stuff is taken out, also the extension on the building is a little less strange.

[SingleChance]

Originally posted by dorfindel
I really don't see any way to fix those "errors" in the cliffs..that's just how the tileset is.

no it's not...those cliff errors can be fixed easily... right now you have TONS of errors in those cliffs =x

[dorfindel]

Originally posted by SingleChance


no it's not...those cliff errors can be fixed easily... right now you have TONS of errors in those cliffs =x

well, point out -clear- examples, and if possible could someone do similar sections of the ones with errors, but correctly? Because I really can't find the tiles

[LegendaryAzreil]

Originally posted by SingleChance


no it's not...those cliff errors can be fixed easily... right now you have TONS of errors in those cliffs =x

agreed.

[FreezeBurnX]

6/10... Good Cliff tiling using but there are several tile errors, the house ground got ugly, the water could be more detailed...

[slay3r89]

4/10

Too many errors on the cliff tiles.
The Water details is ugly with the repeating tiles.
I see some grass tiles errors also.
The house could be more creative.
Its a nice level and I like the way the cliffs flow..But they need fixed. And there are ways to fix them. Its not just how the tiles go...

Good START though.
Very promising...

[zell12]

Here are your main errors, I'll post again and show you how to fix your most abundant error. :o

[SaijinGohan]

That would make for an awesome inside. If you looked at how the house was layed, it was right on a cliff and the window.. if the house wasnt there would be right in front of a cliff. The inside of the house could have some revamped cliff tiles to make it almost like a hobbit house.

I like the idea that went into the level, but I dont like how it came out. 4/10

[zell12]

Here is the biggest mistake you did:

[dorfindel]

Originally posted by zell12
Here is the biggest mistake you did:

I actually didn't make that error :O...that's very glaring.

on that other image..I see how a lot of those tilings look bad...I'll check to see if there's a better way, not sure though -_-