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Old 08-21-2003, 03:31 AM
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Red face yup, another level to rate

made this today and yesterday, what would you say?
rate 1-10 please
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Old 08-21-2003, 04:07 AM
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A recent flood?

The raised grass is way too abundant, and is as straight as if it was designed with a ruler.
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Old 08-21-2003, 04:53 AM
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Hmm, to much sand and water. I see some tile errors in some spots. Try adding more grass and other detail. Like be more creative instead of repeated tile usage. ;]
Overall I give it a 6/10
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Old 08-21-2003, 04:56 AM
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ok imma fix
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Old 08-21-2003, 06:09 AM
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yes it could have been a flash flood :P

any better? fixed waterfalls and bent some stuff
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Old 08-21-2003, 06:25 AM
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6/10 also. don't like the idea of waterfalls dumping into shallow water though x.x
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Old 08-21-2003, 07:08 AM
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it aint hiting shalow water
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Old 08-21-2003, 08:17 AM
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I'd slap you but i'm too tired, i'll give you some reasons tomorrow when I get up.
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Old 08-21-2003, 11:30 AM
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Your obviously new to level building. Quite a few tile error's and ugly path's and the beach is a bit odd, apart from that it's good:P
Remind's me of how i made level's:o
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Old 08-21-2003, 08:01 PM
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ok show me these tile errors >.>
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Old 08-21-2003, 09:53 PM
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Here are most of them, I hope you get the point.
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Old 08-22-2003, 12:34 AM
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err i put up a old screenshot.. once i get home i'll put up the one i ment to get up
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Old 08-22-2003, 01:25 AM
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ok, i fixed some stuff you pointed out excal, didn't realy notice that the waterfalls looked that bad till you pointed out..
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Old 08-22-2003, 03:23 AM
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bah, there are still errors with the bottom of the waterfall as well as the edges of cliffs.
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Old 08-22-2003, 10:50 AM
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Here are most of them, I hope you get the point.
thanks for saving me time bro.. i usually count tile errors.. you missed quite a few but i guess since you said "most" you implied you quit after your eyes started hurting from tile hell

im gonna start making levels again soon

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