Goblin

MaikuMike · #1 07-11-2003, 02:05 AM

A goblin sprite I am working on. I wanted to see how it looked before i moved on to walking and other directions. Constructive critiscizm(sp?) wanted.

Androk · #2 07-11-2003, 02:38 AM

Looks like Oasis Character *laughs*

Seriusly thought it folows same pattern x.X Also Arm that's to the side is bad, it looks too short...

MKSLAYER · #3 07-11-2003, 03:39 AM

more shading X_X it looks really bad shading wise cept for pants i know i must sound like a living anus saying this but i'd redo the shading and pick a place where the light is comming from like when you sketch so it look better and yeah...i think thats it o yeah the club is a little lob sided try and make it a little more smoother X_X man i just basically told you to re do the whole thing damn i hate myself

Birdbird_0 · #4 07-12-2003, 03:13 PM

It's cute. It doesn't need to be shaded if you don't want it to be, but you might want to bring out the depth a bit more or make him a bit more chubby

TripleE · #5 07-13-2003, 07:38 AM

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Originally posted by Birdbird_0
It's cute. It doesn't need to be shaded if you don't want it to be, but you might want to bring out the depth a bit more or make him a bit more chubby

Agreed.

I think it looks good. Maybe more shaded around the inner part of his slightly raised arm would look neat. Make a chubby one also,

GhettoChild · #6 07-13-2003, 07:11 PM

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Originally posted by Birdbird_0
It's cute. It doesn't need to be shaded if you don't want it to be, but you might want to bring out the depth a bit more or make him a bit more chubby

*stops and realizes Birdbird just posted* heh

Yes, chubbier is better. You don't need the darkoutline to be so thick either, you probably tried rounding it about and ended up making thicker

konidias · #7 07-13-2003, 07:25 PM

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Originally posted by Androk
Looks like Oasis Character *laughs*

Seriusly thought it folows same pattern x.X Also Arm that's to the side is bad, it looks too short...

-.-

davidpsy · #8 07-13-2003, 08:54 PM

Lol that looks like an old SA char. But its kool.

GoZelda · #9 07-18-2003, 03:53 PM

Looks nice, but:
1) arm is unnatural as said
2) can you imagine someone holding a club like that? i mean, can it actually fight holding it like that?
3) the club is a little short, isn't it?

Also, get rid of the pants and give hem those tarzan thingy pants... you know, cloth and a rope.

MadWolf · #10 07-18-2003, 08:55 PM

Looks cool, add some depth and more colors. Contrast seems off.

zs0 · #11 07-21-2003, 03:33 AM

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Originally posted by Androk
Looks like Oasis Character *laughs*

It does :o

MaikuMike · #12 07-21-2003, 04:03 AM

I made the goblin and i swear i have never seen the other two in my life X_x.

Sorry if it looks like yours, it looks kinda the same size but my shading is messed up on the stomach, and the goblin doesnt look anything like the humans... I dont see how it looks stolen.

Golbez · #13 07-21-2003, 04:26 AM

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Originally posted by MaikuMike
I made the goblin and i swear i have never seen the other two in my life X_x.

Sorry if it looks like yours, it looks kinda the same size but my shading is messed up on the stomach, and the goblin doesnt look anything like the humans... I dont see how it looks stolen.

And this is coming from a guy who said he has lv. 5 RC on Arch lol